Left in the uncertain condition.
There was no hope of desirable situation.
Thrashed by a sudden thunderstorm.
I have no strength to fight the storm.
Body collapsed and mind became rest.
I was left behind with the bloody fest.
Soul cried and heart broke.
Everything vanished at a sudden stroke.
I cried but tears didn’t fell.
Made me realize, all is not well.
Mind stopped to think and perform.
Started moving in the path of thorn.
Collecting the pieces of my hopes and desire.
Buried all those in a burning fire.
Life may not go the way I want.
I need to start from the scratch to grow a new plant.
Bleeding from inside and outside.
There was no reason to live any life.
I cried but tears didn’t fell.
Made me realize, all is not well.
I smiled and smiled.
Leaving behind the darkened nights.
Left searching for any hope.
Now its time to create a new hope.
Building from the base one more time.
Let the life play with my time.
I won’t give up.
Remembering those moments gives me sensational feeling.
As that time…
I cried but tears didn’t fell.
Made me realize, all is not well.
All is not well.
– Ashish Kumar
Deep thoughts. Beautifully written!
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Hey thank you so much and welcome to my blog… Good to have your visit here… keep visiting… 😉
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Interesting Poetical lines, Ashish.. Nicely composed!
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Thank you so much sir. Glad that you liked my work. 🙂
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“I cried but tears didn’t fell.
Made me realize, all is not well.
All is not well.”
I know exactly how this feels
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Yes those who have went through that they can understand. Thank you so much for reading and liking my work. Welcome to my blog and keep visiting. ☺️
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You write great pieces..keep up the good work
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That’s so nice of you. Humbled. 🙌☺️
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I mean it..
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Thanks a lot. Your posts are very good as well. Readers appreciation is the driving force for writers and I am happy that you liked my literary pieces. 🙌☺️
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Keep up the good work😊
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Sure. I will. ☺️
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Nice write up !!
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Thank you so much and welcome to my blog… Keep visiting… 🙂
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All will be well if not today .. keep hoping 🙂 loved the poem .. you are a versatile writer.. keep it up
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This is a big compliment i.e versatile, for me and I have to maintain that… Thanks a lot for appreciation… 🙂
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I would like to quote the lines I liked the most in this one, “Collecting the pieces of my hopes and desire.
Buried all those in a burning fire.”
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Hmmm… I know these lines are the heart of this poem… I also don’t know how this thought came but when I completed the poem, these two lines were the most touchy… 🙂
Thank you so much for reading and sharing such a nice view at my work… 🙂
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You’re welcome 😊😊
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🙂
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