I came suddenly in your life.
Giving both of us, a reason to survive.
You were mine and I was yours.
At a sudden, you closed all the doors.
Left me alone without giving me the reason.
I was shocked with this shattered situation.
You were the reason for happiness.
Now, you are the only reason for sadness.
You went to an unknown world.
Devastating our happy world.
Come back soon or it will be too late.
Without you I can’t survive for more days.
I remembered all those memories.
When…
You were mine and I was yours.
At a sudden, you closed all the doors.
Closed all the doors.
– Ashish Kumar
Seems a tragedy, I hope it is not inspired from a real event close to you?
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Hmmm… Tough question indeed… 🙂
This is just an imagination which I thought to pen it down… 🙂
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Beautifully Broken..
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Thanks a lot Mansi for reading and liking my work… 🙂
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Beautifully expressed!
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Thank you so much and welcome to my blog… keep visiting… 🙂
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It appeared like a poetic story.. hope she will open the door soon
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Hope your words should become true… 🙂 Thank you for reading and liking the poem… 🙂
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Oh,.so I was not wrong..it was a real story, no…
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Hahaha…. No it’s just an imagination… My comment was also an imagination if something happens like this in future… Better to say “contingency planning”…. Lol… 🙂
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Lol..👏😂
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Hahaha… 🙂
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Beautifully structured !!
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Thanks a lot… Glad you liked it… 🙂
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The ache in this is so palpable.
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Thank you so much for reading and glad to know that you were able to find the real sense of this poem… 🙂
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You’re most welcome Ashish 🙂
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Loud claps 👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Hahaha… Thanks a lot… 🙂
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