I was wet.
Not because of rain.
But because of pain.
Rain was coming from the sky.
And tears were falling from the eyes.
Tears and rain, both mixed.
Combination was never fixed.
Unholy alliance was formed.
Survival was distance long.
Temperature surged, mind upset.
Anger reached its peak, cool absent.
Weather changed, but not the situation.
Startling moments added the frustration.
At that moment...
Soul cried, I cried but tears dried.
Tried to clear the pain, but it was a failed try.
As "rain of pain" arrived back.
Making the life black.
Making the life black.
That time...
I was wet.
Not because of rain.
But because of pain.
Rain was coming from the sky.
And tears were falling from the eyes.
- Ashish Kumar
Relatable and it really made me cry. As, it reminds me of old times When I cried in the rain.
Rain wash away the tears but the pain remains the same😔
Very nice poetry, loved it. ☺❤
Well, sometimes those moments are necessary to become stronger in life… Thank you so much for reading and sharing your views… Glad you find it relatable… Thanks again for the appreciation… 🙂
Wonderful poem!
Rain and pain comes and goes. Bright sunny days also comes and goes! We enjoy and we suffers. Pain and gain are two sides of one coin.
I am moved by your poem, however!
Best wishes!!😊
You’re so welcome Ashish! It’s always a pleasure to read your work my friend! 💖.
Thanks too for the twitter follow. I don’t have a clue what I’m doing there! 🤣💖
Thank you so much for your kind words and showing interest in my writing… Means a lot… 🙂
Hahaha, I am also not much active on Twitter.. All my tweets are link to my posts which is auto published on Twitter… 😉 😛 Glad to connect with you there as well… 😉
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Beautiful poem..
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Thank you so much sir for reading and liking it… 🙂
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That was a very beautiful poems so very meaningful, dear Ashish 💕🙏🏾
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Thank you so much sir for reading and sharing your views… glad you liked the poem… 🙂
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It’s my pleasure dear 🌷🙏🏾
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My pleasure as well to have your visit and views sir… 🙂
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So sweet of you to think that way! I feel overwhelmed with the regards 🌷
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Read ‘poem’ in place of poems pl
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such typo happens… no issues sir 🙂
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From tear to tear….
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Hahaha… Thanks a lot for reading and sharing your views.
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Mine pleasure dear
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Relatable and it really made me cry. As, it reminds me of old times When I cried in the rain.
Rain wash away the tears but the pain remains the same😔
Very nice poetry, loved it. ☺❤
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Well, sometimes those moments are necessary to become stronger in life… Thank you so much for reading and sharing your views… Glad you find it relatable… Thanks again for the appreciation… 🙂
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Absolutely right😊👍
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A lovely poem, Ashish👌👌
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Thank you so much sir for reading and sharing your views… glad you liked it. 🙂
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Wonderfully written, Ashish. A painfully beautiful piece.
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Thank you so much Shruthi for reading and liking the poem… Glad you appreciated it… 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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Intense emotions…. well composed.
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Thank you so much for reading… Glad you liked it…
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Beautifully penned…. Heart touching 💙😊👍
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Lovely!
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Thank you so much… Glad you liked it… 🙂
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I was wet.
Not because of rain.
But because of pain.
These lines convey the emotion touching beautifully. The repetition makes the emotion felt more deeply.
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Thank you so much for taking your time to read the poem and providing your valuable views… Means a lot… Glad you liked it… 🙂
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You are very welcome, my pleasure truly.
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Beautiful Ashish. Love the flow of words.
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WOW.amazing and most emotional poem.,,🌺🌺🌺
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😊😊😊😊
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Wonderful poem!
Rain and pain comes and goes. Bright sunny days also comes and goes! We enjoy and we suffers. Pain and gain are two sides of one coin.
I am moved by your poem, however!
Best wishes!!😊
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Indeed, nothing lasts forever. Thank you so much sir for reading and sharing your valuable insights… Glad you liked the poem.
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Happy to read your posts. Bring more posts. Posts are nothing but your expression and you are sharing that with us.
Stay blessed always 😊👍
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Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation. Means a lot… 🙂
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😊👍
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Very descriptive poem. Really reflects your feelings!
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Thank you so much for reading and liking it… Welcome to my world of writing… Keep visiting… 🙂
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So beautiful so emotional yes rain of pain arrive back!well shared 🤗🎉💓
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Thank you so much for reading and liking the poem… Glad you appreciated it.
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It’s my pleasure 💕🎉stay blessed 💕🎉🙂
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Thanks a lot for your kind words and blessings.. 🙂
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Beautifully penned…
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Thank you so much for reading and liking it… 🙂
Welcome to my world of writing… Keep visiting… 🙂
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Heart touching. Beautiful poem Ashish! 👍
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Such a beautiful poem Ashish!~
💖💖🌈👏
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Thank you so much for reading and liking the poem… Humbled… 🙂
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You’re so welcome Ashish! It’s always a pleasure to read your work my friend! 💖.
Thanks too for the twitter follow. I don’t have a clue what I’m doing there! 🤣💖
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Thank you so much for your kind words and showing interest in my writing… Means a lot… 🙂
Hahaha, I am also not much active on Twitter.. All my tweets are link to my posts which is auto published on Twitter… 😉 😛 Glad to connect with you there as well… 😉
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Oh of course and you’re s welcome! I’m so glad to hear that!
Oh good 😅 Now I don’t feel so alone I’m like a fish out of water there
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Hahaha… That’s funny. Many including me are like that… Lol… 🙂 😛
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Good combo of rain and tears. Well written…
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Thank you so much sir for reading and liking the poem… Means a lot… 🙂
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Welcome
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A well written, emotive poetic piece here. Keep up the good work. 😊
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Thank you so much for reading and liking the poem… Glad you appreciated it. 🙂
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Your welcome Ashish! 😊
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Bahut sunder Poem
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Bahut bahut dhanyawad… Glad you liked it.. 🙂
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बहुत इमोशनल लिखी है।👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👌👌👌
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Shukriya… It just happened that I wrote this poem 🤣
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Well written!! 👏🏻
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Loved it..
I can very well relate with this 🥺
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Thank you so much for reading and finding it relatable. Glad you liked it. 🙏
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