As Independence day is coming closer i.e on 15th August. So here is my first take on a poem which is of patriotic theme. I hope it will be liked by you all… 🙂 Happy Independence day… 🙂
ये धरती है बहुत पावन |
यहाँ का हर रंग है मन भावन |
जिसके सिर पे हिमालय का है ताज |
जो है हम सबका सरटाज़ |
शान से सदियों पे जिस पर हमे है गर्व |
हर रोज़ होता हैं यहाँ कोई पर्व |
है जिसका हमें अभिमान |
कोई और नहीं …
वो है अपना हिन्दुस्तान |
खून से सींचा है जिसे शहीदों ने |
जिसके लिए सर कटा दिया वीरों ने |
ये माटी है बहुत ही अनमोल |
जो बोलती है हमेशा मीठे बोल |
गोद मे संजोया है जिसने हमे |
माँ की तरह पाला है जिसने हमे |
होता है जिसपे हमें गुमान |
कोई और नहीं …
वो है अपना हिन्दुस्तान |
देश है एक पर भाषा अनेक |
जहाँ के लोग हैं सॉफ और नेक |
है कौन जो इस से प्यार नहीं करेगा |
ढूँदने पर भी ब्रह्मांड में ऐसा देश नहीं मिलेगा |
इसकी वातावरण मे एक अनोखी खुशबू है |
जो कहीं और मिलती नहीं है |
है जहाँ पर सबका मान और सम्मान |
कोई और नहीं …
वो है अपना हिन्दुस्तान |
जिसने किया है संसार पर अनेकों उपकार |
क्यूँ न करे हम उस धरती से प्यार |
यही वो जगह है जहाँ स्वर्ग है बस्ता |
हर दिल मे हिन्दुस्तान है रहता |
इसकी तारीफ कोई लिख नहीं पाएगा |
लिखने भी लगे तो स्याही कम पर जाएगा |
जिसके हर एक कन मे अनोखी ताक़त है |
वो तो अपना भारत है |
नहीं होता है जहाँ किसी का अपमान |
कोई और नहीं …
वो तो है सिर्फ़ अपना हिन्दुस्तान |
अपना हिन्दुस्तान …
– Ashish Kumar
Beautiful! 🙂
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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Dear Ashishji,
Mein Aapko mere tahe dil se naman karta hoon. Aaise shabd likhe hai aapne jo hamare bharat desh ke liye maine abhi tak kahi nahi paade, aur garv hota hai mujhe aapne hindustani hone par. Shubanallah. .keep it up. Happy writing more such poems 🙂
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Bahut bahut shukriya. Ye mere liye bahut bara compliment hai… 🙂
Thank you so much for liking it up to that extent… 🙂
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Your national day is on the same day like ours! I did not know about that!
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That nice to know. The US independence day is celebrated on 4th July. I am not aware so want to know what kind of celebration happens on 15th August in US… 🙂
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LOL… I am not located in the US nor am I US citicen. I am Austrian and I live in the Principality of Liechtenstein in Europe (between Austria and Switzerland). The language we speak is German. 🙂
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Oh… so sorry… It was a big confusion that I possessed… 🙂 Hahaha… Thank you for letting me know… 🙂
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No problem at all. I feel honored that you would consider me as an English speaking person. But to be honest I have a strong connection to the US for about 30 years. So the confusion is justified… lol
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Oh… That’s nice to know. 🙂
Actually I got confused because I saw a post on your blog which was on 4th July i.e US Independence day. So I thought the same… Now the things are clear… Hahaha… 🙂
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Hahaha… yes, that might have been confusing…lol We lived in the States for a while and my son was born over there. Also I call California my second home, and some other things. So I feel very connected 🙂
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Well, that sounds good… Nice to know that… 🙂 Its so nice that you have lived in so many places… 🙂
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It really is and I have learned a lot! Also I lost my roots and can basically live everywhere (where it is warm… lol)
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Yes, life is all about learning… I like your spirit to survive anywhere… That’s great… 🙂
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Very healthy… lol
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Hahaha… 🙂
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Bahut sundar, Ashish! Matri bhav se oat-prot 🙂
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Mast hai boss!! Feeling it
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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beautiful and patriotic 🙂
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Deshbhakti ki lahar! bahut achha.
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Welcome to my blog … good to have you here… 🙂
Bhaut bahut shukriya jo apko meri ye kavita pasand ayi… 🙂
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Very nice Ashish … Deshbhakti se otprot !
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Thank you so much… glad you appreciated it… 🙂
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nice poem!!!! and happy I day!!
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Great job, yaar. Happy Independence Day 😊
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Thank you and wish you the same… 🙂 thank you for liking the poem… 🙂
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A beautiful dedication…. superb
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Thank you so much… glad you liked it… 🙂
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bahut achhi Kavita Kaviwar
lekin आपने एक जगह “सरटाज़” लिखा है जो की “सरताज” होना चाहिए
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Welcome to my blog… 🙂
Thank you for reading and liking the poem…
Shukriya wo mistake batane ko. Wo software problem ke karan ho raha hai main fir se koshish karunga use thik karne ki… 🙂 Bahut bahut dhanyawad jo apko ye kavita acchi lagi…
keep visiting… 🙂
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Thanks for friendly reply
I read some of your poem today
Your thoughts are impressive
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Thank you so much for giving your time on my writing… Getting a piece of appreciation from readers is a reward for me… Thanks again… 🙂
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Bahut hi umda …..that is so enchanting, such vehement words….keep it up
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Hey, thank you so much for appreciating my effort… glad you liked it and welcome to my blog… keep visiting… 🙂
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Yes I will surely
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Thanks a lot… 🙂
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