Emotional overflow and reluctant mind. Trashed the real due to floating mind. Sometimes, lack of reality leads to unreal experience. Full of joy and flying in the sky without sense. Sense coming to normal, realize the mistake. Better to rectify rather to commit another mistake. Hold for a moment, look and introspect. Absorb the moment while you ruminate. Ruminate to understand the important lesson. Keep your feet on the land while you fly. Keep your mind open and not on the sky. Ruminate to learn and explore the life. Keep the balance to have a happy survive. Keep the balance to have a happy survive.
– Ashish Kumar
The narration and flow of poem was superb! loved it!
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Thank you so much for reading and sharing your views… glad you liked it… 🙂
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Stunning!
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Thank you so much for reading and liking the poem… 🙂
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Well said, Ashish. It is all about balance.
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Thank you so much for reading and sharing your valuable views… Means a lot… 😉
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My pleasure, Ashish, really!
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Humbled to know the same… 🙂
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😊
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A beautiful piece, Ashish! Maintenance of balance is so essential. Well said!!
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Indeed, balance is essential in life… Thank you so much sir for reading and liking the poem… 🙂
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The mind does have its own ways. You describe it beautifully in your poem. The balance or the imbalance determine the outcome – it is important to keep the balance.
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Rightly said… Outcome is determined by the balance or imbalance… Thank you so much for reading the poem and sharing your valuable feedback… Means a lot.. 🙂
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You are vrey welcome truly.
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The flow throughout the piece was so so good it kept me reading ❤️!
Very well penned sir.. balance is so necessary! Thanks for putting out such an amazing piece! Loved it
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Thank you so much Ahiri for reading and liking the poem. So happy you liked my work… 🙂
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My pleasure ✨
And I always love reading your works sir 🍁
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Thanks a lot for your kind words, Ahiri… Means a lot.. 🙂
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A positive massage in your wonderful poem,💐
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Thank you so much Arunaji for reading and liking the poem…Glad you appreciated it.. 🙂
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You are welcome,🙏
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An insightful one..loved your words…
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Thank you so much… Glad you liked it… 🙂
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Wise words,Ashish.
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Thank you so much… Glad you liked it. 🙂
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🙂🙂
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Written so well! I love all of your poetry! 😄
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This beautiful poem have so many meanings !!
Everytime I read it, I find something else.
Masterpiece 👏🏻
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Thank you so much for reading and giving a positive feedback… Glad to know the same. 🙂
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