Long journey came to an end.
Showcasing revealed at the end.
Moment of joy followed by sorrow.
Body and heart became hollow.
Disease of trust rests uncured.
As betrayal continued its go.
Insane actions with thorny words.
Situation was out of control.
Changing colours like chameleon.
He was a moron.
Fake expression and always lied.
A deceiver was sitting beside.
Doing all in the name of a supporter.
He turned out to be a traitor.
Realization came too late.
As the damage was already made.
Life taught a good lesson.
Trusting should be a cautious lesson.
Deceiver do not come with prior notice.
As they always pretend to be supportive.
They always pretend to be supportive.
- Ashish Kumar
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That’s an amazing Poem Ashish, very valuable n deep meanings of facts 👍
Life taught a good lesson. Trusting should be a cautious lesson: really it sh/be greatest lesson n one must be very cautious with unknown, your post must reach to many n I hope they should take as a cautious learning.
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Thank you so much for your overwhelming response towards my poem… Grateful for your appreciation… Means a lot…
Glad you found the poem deep and meaningful… Humbled … 🙂 Feel free to share the poem…
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My pleasure Ashish, sure 👍
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Thank you so much… My pleasure as well… 🙂
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Wow! you articulated very well.
Often, we make rely on someone who isn’t worthy.
There is this illusion of “everyone is a good person” which takes us down.
I’ve been in this situation before. 2 Friends! 2 friends I’ve lost coz they showed the same change as you described in your poetry.
Their contribution was more of a lesson to me.
That’s why watching your back always is quite a good option…
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Thank you so much for reading the poem and sharing your experiences… yes, sometimes trusting others hearts when they become a deceiver….
Life is such. It keep us teaching lessons through various situations and these experiences adds to our power of decision making, this what I always think…
Happy to have your views… Glad you liked the poem… 🙂
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You’re very welcome Ashish. Keep coming with the good stuff. 😊
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Sure… Thank you so much for your kind words and appreciation… 🙂
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very emotional write up .
you have expressed the bitter experience of life ..
stay blessed and stay happy..
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Thank you so much for reading and liking the poem… glad you appreciated it and many thanks for your kind words and blessings…
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You have expressed it very well. It’s often hard to find out the betrayers until it’s too late. They always keep up pretences until they get what they want and are done with us
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Yes, they pretend till their interest or their job is done…
Thanks a lot for reading and liking the poem… Glad you found it worth… 🙂
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True!
You’re very welcome 🙂
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Truth
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Thank you so much… Welcome to my world of writing… Keep visiting… 🙂
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Good job!
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Thanks a lot for the appreciation… Glad you liked it… Welcome to my world of writing… Keep visiting… 🙂
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well written…YBR
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Thank you so much… Glad you liked it… 🙂
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An amazing poem, Ashish. Life in itself is a lesson. You have nicely brought out its intricacies. A beautifully crafted piece👌👌👍
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Thank you so much sir for reading and sharing your thoughts on the poem… Delighted to have your appreciation towards the poem…. 🙂
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“Life taught a good lesson.
Trusting should be a cautious lesson.
Deceiver do not come with prior notice.
As they always pretend to be supportive.
They always pretend to be supportive.”
THE TRUTH. Very well-written and expressed. My compliments 👏🏻
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Thank you so much, Geet, for reading and liking the poem… Glad you appreciated the poem… Means a lot… 🙂
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This is a gorgeous beautiful poem, laying down a very sad brutal reality in such gentle words. Unfortunately this is true, and so many such lessons strewn in our human journey.
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Delighted to have your insights on this poem and yes, it is true and we should keep learning those lessons…
Thank you so much for reading and liking it… means a lot… 🙂
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You are most welcome!
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Always a pleasure to hear from you… 🙂
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Namaste Ashish bhai,
An inspiring story of a 19 year old Delhi blogger. Please visit her: https://blabberblah.wordpress.com
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I have seen it 4th time can I ask you reason behind sharing it this strongly answer if you like I just want to know the reason😊
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Answers lie inside blubber blah’s blog.
It is written by Tejaswee Rao. Her posts are full of life and inspiration. Tj is the most influencing blogger, I have ever met. She was full of life.
I found this blog on the last day but the last post on Blabber blah was published on 29 July 2010 (almost a decade ago). Tj is no more in this world. She had great potential.
Her words have a deep impact on my heart and mind. I wish more bloggers know her. 🙂
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Oh sorry about that and I will definitely visit thanks for mentioning
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Sure, Lokesh… I will visit the blog shortly… Thanks for letting me know… 🙂
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Please. It’s a beautiful blog.
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Very beautifully expressed yeah you are very right in saying we trust a person and out of our notice the person turn out to be a deceiver. Life is no doubt a amazing teacher which keep on teaching lessons we must try to learn from them.
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Indeed, life is the biggest teacher which provide us tremendous knowledge… Thank you so much for reading the poem and sharing your valuable views… 🙂
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Wow! That’s an emotional and meaningful poem..Enjoyed reading it..
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Thank you so much Sandhyaji for reading and liking the poem… Glad you enjoyed it… 🙂
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Beautiful poem ☺️
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🤗🤗😊
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Wow this left me speechless 👏👏🙇♀️ How deep and very true!
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Thank you so much for reading the poem and liking it… Delighted to know that the poem was able to make a mark… Thanks again… 🙂
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The pleasure is mine!
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Love this! I’ve been seeing a lot of poems about trust and betrayal, this is pretty great.💗
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Thank you so much for reading and sharing your views… Glad you liked the poem…
Welcome to my world of writing… Keep visiting… 🙂
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Sure will!😊
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Thanks a lot… Humbled 🙂
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nice !!
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Thank you so much… Glad you liked the poem…
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The perfect art of deception. Well written. 🙂
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Thank you so much for reading and liking it… Pleased and glad to have you here…
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Thanks Ashish. Definitely will. 🙂
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Thanks a lot… Humbled.. 🙂
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Deception – a hurtful lesson that feels like you’ll never be able to trust again. Hard to understand why people do this, but in the end, it’s because they want something from you that they know you wouldn’t give if you knew the truth about them. At least that’s been my conclusion with my experiences of this.
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You are true in concluding about deception… It is a well known fact that few people turn out to be deceiver… a kind of cheating which people do with them who trusts them….
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your insightful comment… And apologies for my late revert… 😦 Keep visiting 🙂
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