A building made by immense struggle and effort. That collapsed due to a sudden storm. Collecting the pieces of the collapsed structure. I lost my own mind and the body structure. The language and gesture all went in vain. At a sudden surprise, I was left in pain. I didn’t cry but tears fell. The tree I planted ultimately fell. In the narrow passage of my heart, there was a hope. Searching for the way to convert that hope into a scope. Loads of loads of trouble were in the queue. Not aware whether this was a never ending queue. The journey which I started from the bottom of my heart. That came to an end which left my heart with loads of hurt. I enjoyed that moment a lot. As I have to build another plot. The plot with more immune capacity. That is capable of holding any tragedy. Hoping to get all is well. I didn’t cry but tears fell. Because… The tree I planted ultimately fell. The tree I planted ultimately fell.
–Ashish Kumar
So touching lines! Beautifully written, as always 👌👌
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Thank you so much sir… glad you liked it… 🙂
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Obstacles are life.
Well written Ashish
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Indeed, life cannot be obstacle free…. thanks a lot sir for reading and liking it… 🙂
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Always a pleasure Ashish
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My pleasure always to have your views… 🙂
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Life keeps throwing one obstacle after another. Beautifully penned!
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Yes, life is all about handling those obstacles… thanks a lot for reading and liking the poem… 🙂
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Absolutely! Pleasure is all mine 😊
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Humbled…. Its my pleasure as well to have your views… 🙂
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Do keep writing 😃
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Of course…. Thanks a lot for your constant support… 🙂
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Pleasure 😃
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Great,
Well written..
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Thank you so much sir… Glad you liked it… 🙂
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Beautifully written, Ashish 🙏🌹
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Thank you so much, Diana… Glad you appreciated the poem… Means a lot… 🤗🙏🤗
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ohhh so meaningful ❤❤😐😐
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Thank you so much… Glad you found the poem meaningful… Means a lot… 🙂
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Such a wonderful piece Ashish..!😊
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Thank you so much… Pleased to know that you liked the poem… 🙂
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You’re very welcome..!
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I didn’t cry but tears fell ,so touching lines. Very lovely post 👌🙏🌷
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Thank you so much… Glad you appreciated it… 🙂
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Most welcome 🙏🌷
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🙏🤗🙏
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You captured that pain perfectly👍…the pain when something made with love and efforts falls apart…
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Thank you so much for reading and understanding the poem…. Glad you appreciated it… 🙂
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Well written …YBR
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Thank you so much… Glad you liked it… 🙂
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I didn’t cry but tears fell – such is the beauty of hope, faith, and resilience through it all. Unshaken while accessing the situation, allowing the emotion, and trusting the process for all will be well. Beautiful post.
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Life is such… obstacles, hope, faith and being resilient… I am glad you appreciated the poem and liked it… Thank you so much for reading and sharing your views… Means a lot… 🙂
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You are most welcome truly.
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Always a pleasure to hear from you . 🤗🙏🤗
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Beautifully written
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Thank you so much… Glad you liked it… 🙂
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This is so beautifully written ♥️
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Thank you so much for reading and liking it.. Glad you appreciated my work… 🤗🙏🤗
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Wow!!! Deep. Its always a pleasure to read your post. 🙂
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Thank you so much Hema for reading and liking it… Means a lot… 🙏🤗🙏
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Very nice👍
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Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. Welcome to my world of writing… Keep visiting 🤗🙏🤗
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Oh my god! This was so deep and beautiful 🥺 After reading this I didn’t cry but tears fell
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True
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OMG… I am really humbled to have such response from you for this poem. Much gratitude… 👍🤗🙏 Glad you liked the poem.. means a lot 😊
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😊🤗✌
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This is amazing, Ashish. Keep writing.😊
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Thank you so much… Glad you liked the poem… 🙏🤗🙏
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You’re welcome 😊
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Pleased to have your visit and views… 🙂
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Always.😊
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👌
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Thank you so much… Glad you liked it… 🙏🤗🙏
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😊
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Reblogged this on Love & Love Alone.
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Thanks a lot for considering it to be reblogged… 🙂
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Beautiful post.
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Thanks a lot… Glad you liked it… 🙂 And welcome back here after a long time… Hope you are doing good?
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Yes. Yes. I’m doing good. Stay safe.
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Mind if I ask a question?
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Please go ahead with your question… Don’t hesitate…
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Is it a paid or premium site of yours?
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It’s free… Haven’t purchased any plan so far… 😊
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Okay. Thankyou.
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Exemplary….
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Thank you so much for this compliment… Means a lot.. glad you liked it… 🙂
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Deep and beautiful! Enjoyed reading it.
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Thank you so much Sandhyaji for reading and sharing your feedback…. glad you appreciated it… 🙂
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So heart-touching writing❤️😊
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Thank you so much…. Glad you appreciated it… Means a lot… 🙂
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Very well written Ashish.. 🙂 You captured perfectly how it feels when we face failures in every other turn in life…👏
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Thank you so much… Life is such, pain and gain… Thanks a lot for sharing your feedback on my writing… means a lot… 🙂
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Please follow my blog also please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please 🙏 💖
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Already followed… Thanks for following my blog too… 🙂
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Thankyou for following and welcome also 😀
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My pleasure… 🙂
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🙂
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Great expression Ashish.
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Thank you so much… Glad you liked it… 🤗🙏
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