Miffed with the unexpected battle.
I landed in the path of unrealized trouble.
Nature was cool with its weather.
I was facing the breeze of debacle.
Moving in the no man’s land.
I reached the land of sand.
No ray was able to motivate.
It was difficult to plant and cultivate.
Challenge and trouble came back to back.
Nothing was left while I looked back.
I didn’t cried but tears came slowly.
I started to make new path of my journey.
Barren land doesn’t give fruitful results.
Life is full of twisted results.
Challenge lies in the heart and mind.
Accept it and don’t mind.
Life may be sometimes barren.
Convert it into a terrain.
This is what t I realized from the fiasco.
I started with full dedication…
And didn’t stop from the coming tornado.
Didn’t stop from the coming tornado.
– Ashish Kumar
You can’t stop from the coming tornado and true words
Life can always give you a barren land but better turn it into a terrain…Good work Ashish…
Finally we have English.
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Thank you so much for your kind words and motivational comment. Good to know that you liked it and yeah I do write in English and most of my work are in English only… Looking forward to have your views… Thanks again for taking your time to read and finding it worth… 🙂 🙂
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I love good work and you did a good job.It is not easy for a lyman to read poetry and understand it with ease.Only good poets bring out this understanding with simplicity.Kudos Kumar….and your name Kumar reminds me of a childhood buddy back in lower school.
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Hey thank you so much for praising me for my work and considering it “Good” which is a big compliment for me… And it’s nice to know that my name made you to recall your childhood friend… Humbled… 🙂 🙂
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Sorry for that bro.Will have to log in via computer as I always use my phone so I doubt I have access to my spam responses.
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No issue… Take your time… 🙂
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Thanks a lot my brother.Bless you.
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Reblogged this on Vijayagiri views.
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Thank you so much sir for the reblog… 🙂
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Fantastic composition 👍👏👌…Loved these lines, “Barren land doesn’t give fruitful results.
Life is full of twisted results.
Challenge lies in the heart and mind.
Accept it and don’t mind.
Life may be sometimes barren.
Convert it into a terrain.
This is what t I realized from the fiasco.
I started with full dedication…
And didn’t stop from the coming tornado.”
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Thank you so much for taking your time to read and finding my work worth… Glad you liked it. Good to know that my poem and the specific lines were worthy… Thanks again… 🙂
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My pleasure 😊
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Truly inspiring.. so true if you are determined and dedicated no tornado can stop you! The way you have written is amazing! 💖
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Thanks a lot Kranti for reading and finding it worth… Glad you appreciated it. Means a lot.. 🙂
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My absolute pleasure! 💖😊
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Thank you so much for your kind words and being a regular reader of my posts… 🙂 🙂
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😊
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The landscape of our mind and soul and the weather turmoils… good analogy, Ashish!
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Glad you appreciated it.. 🙂
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I did, Ashish 🙏
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Thank you so much mam. Really glad and humbled… 🙏🤗
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🙂 🙂
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Great post Ashish. It’s a motivational poem with beautiful expression.
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Thank you so much mam for reading and finding it worth to be praised.. Glad you appreciated it… 🙂
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You deserve it. 😊
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Thank you so much for these words… Humbled… 🙂
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thanks for all your likes on my site over at Old chook Enterprises! You have a really eclectic thing happening here! Poetry, stories and images! You’re keeping busy 🙂
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Thank you so much for taking your time to go through my blog posts… Good to be connected with you here at WordPress. I am humbled to have your visit and your comment is a kind of motivation to me… Welcome to my world of writing… Keep visiting… 🙂 🙂
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a breathtaking vision…. could feel every word…. great job on such a powerful delivery
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Thank you so much for stopping by and giving your time to read my work… Glad to hear that my poem gave you a breathtaking which is a big compliment… 🙏🙏🙏
Welcome to my world of writing… Keep visiting 🤗🙏
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Thank you for following me and for your considerate introduction. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Sure… Keep visiting for my upcoming posts… 🙏🤗
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Hi please check your WordPress Spam once as I have posted my comment on your blog but seems it went to your Spam. Please check it once… 🤔
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sure I will
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I have approved your comment…..it’s all good I think… also feel free hit up my post..
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Sure. I will be visiting your blog for your posts… 🤗
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thank you very much..!
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You are welcome 🙏
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Lovely composition
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Thank you so much for reading and liking my work… Glad you appreciated it… Welcome to my world of writing… Keep visiting… 🙂 🙂
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