One day I thought of writing a poem.
After a big gap of many months.
Thought came and so do words.
I tried to pen down my words.
Mind was full of feelings and emotions.
I was trying to portray my inner situation.
Blurred in the midst of day and night.
I was writing the journey of my life.
Moving the pen slowly on the paper.
I started to describe my feelings on paper.
The journey which was belligerent and haunted.
Made me to write which needs to be trusted.
I gave my all effort to depict the suffering.
Slowly tears came while recalling.
During the course of the ups and downs.
I did have nervous breakdown.
Relationships became trading port.
I was left without any support.
Recalling those memoirs while writing.
My hand and brain were shivering.
I took a break for a while.
Hoping to smile while I write.
Couple of hours passed and I sat again to write.
Moving into deep of my heart to portray that drive.
Powerful emotions and strong words were chosen.
Unable to phrase the sentence, the poem was left open.
The poem was incomplete and I was shocked.
Made me to realize, I entered the writer’s block.
Feelings, emotions and scenes everything I have selected.
The poem which I started to write never completed.
I look towards my literary piece of work.
Hoping to complete that work.
As I started to write and complete the poem.
Made me to feel, it’s an incomplete poem.
– Ashish Kumar
Beautiful Ashish👌👍
may be that’s why they say incompleteness is beauty in itself.
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Hahaha… Maybe but I don’t how and why I wrote this poem… Just thought of writing but wrote something different… Thank you so much for your kind words and appreciation… Glad you liked the poem… 🙏👍🤗
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It happened.. That’s why I fix the title of the content last… Nice one..
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Yes that’s right.. I decide title of the poem post completing… Thank you so much for reading and liking it… 😂👍😊🙏
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Reblogged this on Vijayagiri views.
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Thank you so much sir for the reblog… 🙏👍🤗
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That’s a beautiful poem💕 Incomplete but so beautiful
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Thank you so much for your appreciation… By the way this poem is complete… 😂😂😂 Thanks a lot… Glad you liked it 😊🙏
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Oh yes…. should’ve written “complete and beautiful 💕” hehe
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Lol… Happens… Thanks a lot for giving your time to read and finding it worth… 🙂 🙂
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❤️😁
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😂🙏🤗😊
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Loved it…So beautifully penned..
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Thank you so much for reading and liking it… Pleased to know the same… 🤗😂🙏
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The words are so beautifully woven, great work Ashish! ❣
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Thank you so Shivani for your kind words… Pleased to know that you appreciated the poem… Thanks a lot… 🤗🙏
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Wahh…kya baat hai👌 Loved it 👍
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Bahut bahut dhanyawad… Glad you enjoyed reading it.. 🤗😊🙏
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My pleasure 😊
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My pleasure as well to have your views here… 😊🙏
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‘Powerful emotions’…. definitely you can’t put down on paper…!
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Yeah it’s difficult to put down on paper… Thank you so much for reading and liking it… 🙏🤗😊
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Nice
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Thank you so much…. 😊🙏🤗
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Tried your hand at least ..you can be proud of the attempt.
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Hey thanks a lot Anamika for your motivational comment… Glad you appreciated the effort… Humbled… 🙂 🙂
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My pleasure Ashish…
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My pleasure as well to have your view here… 🙂
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Jindagi adhure,,,,khwaab adhure……..shabd bhi adhure………magar aapki lekhni adhri nahi hai……..bahut hi khubsurat likha hai.
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Bahut bahut dhanyawad sir jo apko meri ye lekhni pasand ayi… Aabhar apka… Humbled to know the same… 🙂 🙂
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Sometimes incomplete is more meaningful and beautiful than complete! 💖
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Hmmm… True indeed… Thank you so much Kranti for your valuable views… 🙂
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My absolute pleasure 😊
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🙏🤗🙏
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Sometimes a writer’s pen writes in ways that one can never imagine.
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Hmmm… that’s right… Thanks a lot for your encouraging words.. 🙂 🙂
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Beautiful!❤️
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Thank you so much for reading and liking it… 🤗🙏
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The struggle is real. Nice play of thoughts and words. 🙂
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Thanks a lot Prakash for reading and finding it worth… Means a lot… 🙂
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See , why writing is also known as therapy (If it’s your true expression).
Or You play with the words beautifully (If it’s a write up).
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Hmmm… I can’t thank you enough for this wonderful comment which is a gist of the poem which you covered in your kind words…
This poem was a try from my side to write something different and in a different manner and I really appreciate that it’s been liked by the readers… Thanks a lot for your encouragement… 🙂 🙂
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Certainly it’s different, but some of your feelings are also hidden beneath the words.
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Hmmm… Let it be hidden… 🙂 🙂 Thanks a lot for your deep insights… Really appreciate your views… Humbled… 🙂
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This is awesome 😊 Never came across such a beautiful incomplete poem.
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Hey thank you so much for reading and liking my work… Glad you appreciated it… Welcome to my world of writing… Keep visiting 😊🙏
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Sure. It will be my pleasure to read your postings. 😊
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My pleasure as well to have your views on my writing… 🙏😊
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Please check your spam once as I have commented on couple of your posts but seems it went to your Spam… Kindly check it once…
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Splendid 💜
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I am humbled to hear that from you… Thanks a lot for finding it worth… 🤗🤗
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