Sudden storm with lot of dust.
Making the surrounding full of dust.
Cloud bursting with full voice.
Echoing the environment with unnecessary noise.
Day became night due to dark cloud.
Suddenly barking voice started which was loud.
The situation was out of control.
Nothing was left to do the damage control.
Thunderstorm everywhere.
It rained a lot.
Yes, it rained a lot…
Not from the sky, but from the eyes.
It rained a lot.
Not from the sky, but from the eyes.
– Ashish Kumar
Amazing . Last lines have increased the awesomeness of poem.
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Thank you so much Nisthur… 🙂
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Beautiful. Thanks for making me remember something.
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Thanks a lot for reading and finding it worthy… Welcome to my blog… Keep visiting… 🙂
I hope you are fine even though the poem made you remember something…
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You’re welcome Ashish. I am fine. Have a great friday ahead.
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Thank you and have a great Friday and weekend to you as well. ☺️
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🙂
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☺️🙌
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That was an emotional one Ashish! The way it ended!
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Hmm. Thanks a lot Prakash. Glad you appreciated it. 🙂
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Pleasure.. 🙂
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Me too pleased to know that the poem has an emotional touch… 🙂
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Thank you so much for considering me for this award. I will post soon. Thanks again. 👍☺️
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You’re welcome! Take your time and do it whenever you can I don’t mind!
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Hmmm… Sure… 🙂
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So intense..Beautiful
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Thank you so much and welcome to my blog. Keep visiting. 👍☺️
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Last lines made your poem so touching and all the more beautiful!
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Hey… Thank you so much… I am delighted to know that you felt my poem to be worthy and touchy… means a lot… 🙂
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All my pleasure and always welcome 🙂
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Hmmm… That’s so kind of you… 🙂
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Loved reading this…very nice one.
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Thank you so much… Glad you appreciated it.. 🙂
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It rained a lot.
Not from the sky, but from the eyes.🙏
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Hmm. ☺️
Welcome to my blog. Good to have your visit here. Keep visiting. ☺️
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I will! Your blog is interesting 😊
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Means a lot. Humbled to know the same. 👍☺️
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Then let the eyes rain, sometimes better to let go of grief and start afresh just like the rain causes new grass to grow and mitti ki bhini bhini khushboo that’s what life should be…
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Yes life is full of ups and downs and it is we who have to manage both.. The way we handle situation matters…
Your comment is really inspirational… Thank you so much for reading and giving such a positive view… :–)
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Welcome.. But my advice to everyone would be cry lots but for 2 days. Then get up dust yourself and look ahead… Why to look back
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Yes prolong cry is not feasible which lands people in depression too… One should stand and start again which should be the spirit instead of thinking and wasting time for what happened in the past…
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