LET’S BEGIN THE JOURNEY…


There was a time when we used to neglect.
A random change made each of us to select.
You were before and I was present.
But the affection among us was absent.
Neither me nor you cared for each other.
It was just  hate that binds  together.
Time passed you went away.
Leaving behind me on painful way.
I never expressed how much I cared for.
How deliberately I waited for.
What you thought I never came to know.
What I thought you never came to know.
But one thing was clear.
We were knowing each other very well.
Despite of me never being well.
The hatred feeling among was our love.
We were each of our beloved.
Time passed and we got separated.
Leaving each other neglected.

It was a sudden surprise when we met again.
The buried hate came to born again.
We were never made for each other.
That’s what we thought.
The mouth and heart spoke different.
Leaving each of us in silent.
Silent for quite a time.
In order to begin a new time.
You gave indication for end of cold war.
Being together we will fight every war.
Hugging you in distress.
Will you become my Mrs?
I know you know.
What else do we need to know.
We are each of ours soul.
Coming together we will achieve our goal.
You have suffered and I have suffered.
Now its time for each of us to prefer.
Holding each other we will cry.
Solving each others pain we will try.
Gone are the time when we were in vain.
Together we will burn all the pain.
Each of us are made for each other.
The journey of eternal love starts here.
You are my dear and I am your dear.
There is no need for any sorts of fear.
Let’s begin the journey of millions miles.
Let it take the desired time.
Slowly and slowly we will move forward.
Igniting a new flame we will never look backward.
So let’s begin the journey of millions miles.
Let it take the desired time.

love

– Ashish Kumar

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16 thoughts on “LET’S BEGIN THE JOURNEY…

  1. Vamagandhi July 21, 2016 / 10:28 pm

    1. Expressed your thoughts well in simple words and perfect poetic rhyming.
    2. Para 2, sentence 2 is bit erratic, but you may justify it in poetry. Would have preferred better structure.
    3. Sometimes, we try to push some words just to make it rhyme. Need some maturity over this issue to get a better poetry.
    4. Your poetry is complete with good build-up and end.

    Keep writing, and sometimes ignore nasty critics like me 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

    • Ashish kumar July 22, 2016 / 6:41 pm

      Thank you so much for your visit here and giving your nice review at my work…. I always welcome criticisms and suggestions which helps me in improving my work… Do visit in future as well… Thanks again… 🙂

      Like

    • Ashish kumar August 4, 2016 / 9:18 am

      Thank you so much mam for reading and liking my work. 🙂

      Like

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