Weather is cool and the breeze is smooth.
Moving with you is always smooth.
Although hesitation of interaction is clear.
But how can I leave you my dear.
The expression coming from your eyes.
Allow me to go to your side.
Leaving the haunted memories forever.
Holding each others hand we will walk forever.
The first day interaction is still fresh and alive.
You said something which gave me reason to joy.
You talked and talked and I just listened.
The way we met, it just happened.
Your facial expression has something to offer.
Just wondering, is it my offer?
Leaving the rest and coming together.
Holding each others hand we will walk forever.
You have suffered and I have suffered.
Its time for each of us to offer.
The dark side will never be the same.
Together, we will ignite a new flame.
The joy on each of our face is clear.
You are my dear and I am your dear.
Situation never remains the same.
Nothing lasts forever.
Good or bad.
Happy or sad.
Either the pain is light or severe.
One thing is clear…
Holding each others hand we will walk forever.
we will walk forever.
– Ashish Kumar
Beautiful.
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Walking together in the path of eternity…..that’s true love… 🙂 Beautifully penned…
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Thank you so much… glad you appreciated it… 🙂
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Your gorgeous words assemble to a great write up 👍
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Thank you so much… glad you liked it… 🙂
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Love is not about counting the footsteps of each others, it’s all about measuring the path we walked together….
very true…
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Thank you so much for liking my work and welcome to my blog… Thank you for your visit… keep visiting… 🙂
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Inspiring words 😊 beautiful love
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Thank you very much… glad to know that you liked it… 🙂
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Reading your work after a long time! Splendid, as usual!
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Thank you so much… glad you liked it… and welcome back… 🙂
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This is so lovely.. very beautiful Ashish !
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Thank you so much… glad you liked it… 🙂
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It is always so lovely to read your posts dear..
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Thanks a lot… humbled to know the same… 🙂
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This is a gem of a work from you. Absolutely romantic and beautiful!
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Thank you so much for appreciating the poem… privileged to know… 🙂
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Love is in the air again. 😀
Nice poem. 🙂
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Hahaha… 🙂
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Love shines throughout these words. Good one Ashish.
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Thank you so much for liking the poem and welcome to my blog… keep visiting… 🙂
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A very sweet poem, Ashish 🙂
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Thank you so much Purba… 🙂
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Nice..liked it 🙂
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Welcome to my blog… Thank you so much for the visit… Thank you for liking the poem… keep visiting… 🙂
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Lovely poem 🙂
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Thank you so much… glad you liked it… 🙂
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Beautiful this is.. well I just learned that I have missed a lot of amazing stuff from you.. but I’ll try to catch up!
Keep Smiling! 🙂
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Thank you so much Akiraa for liking the poem… Will be waiting for your response on my other poems too… 🙂
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Oh sure! 🙂
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Thank you… 🙂
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This is a very lovely poem, I love your words and thoughts! 🙂 I am hopeful that someday I can find someone to hold my hand and walk with me in this way. Right now I am heartbroken but I guess there is always hope…. Thank you for reading my work, I appreciate your comments very much! 🙂
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Thank you so much for liking the poem… privileged to know that you appreciate this effort of mine… 🙂
I pray that you should get rid of the prevailing unwanted situation soon and your life starts with a new beginning… Best wishes… 🙂
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Thank you for your kind words and wishes… when I love, I don’t do so lightly so when I hurt…. I guess the pain is in proportion to the love. I really loved (still do) that man and he betrayed me…. I still find it hard to believe that he did what he did… oh well, as they say, this too shall pass, but I think it is going to take a very long time, he was very special. Blogging does help and I have met many nice people here, such as yourself, whose kind words and thoughts make my heart hurt a little less, thank you Michelle
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It takes time to get rid of such situation… Lets hope for better tomorrow. You cannot bring back the past so why to spoil the future by thinking what happened in past.
Don’t think too much regarding that. Try to overcome those haunted memories by creating a new jolly moment. Nights are followed by day and your “day” will also come… Be optimistic… 🙂
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Like “ever forever”.. 🙂 The words are nicely used to put forth the thoughts.. 🙂 Nice one Ashish.. 🙂
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Thank you so much for such a wonderful appreciation for this poem… humbled… 🙂
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Is it even real? ❤ Sounded like a perfect dream ❤
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Hahaha… It can be real for someone and cannot be for others. That depends on how one feels and have respect for each other…. I just tried to pen it down after this thought came in my mind and am happy that it is being appreciated by readers… 🙂
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True. I depends on our behavior. Love is about giving. But I feel that I’m selfish.
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In my opinion it’s all about mutual co-operation among both. Just as you cannot clap with one hand, similarly one sided friendship/love or any relation cannot last for long. There are also circumstances when you have immense respect and care for someone but that respect/care is totally ignored and neglected. I have seen several cases of this type. I think it totally depends on understanding.
I am not aware why you consider yourself as selfish and in which context you feel the same. But every person is little bit selfish and being only selfish is not good at all.. There should be a proper balance. 🙂
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Right. I had tried my best. But it wasn’t meant to be. And now, I have stopped worrying about it. What’s meant to be, will happen for sure 😊
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Don’t worry about past as what had happened had already happened. Yes it takes time time to get rid of some condition but we should not stick with that too long as life had much to offer. And one thing bad moments make you stronger enough which will pave the way for your future…Lets prepare for better tomorrow… 🙂
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Thank you 😊😊😊
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Beautiful sentiment nicely conveyed through the poem. While you walk forever, a little rest in between might not be bad. 🙂
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Hahaha… Yes, rest is equally important… 🙂
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Goooodddd
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Ah brilliant bhai….mesmerizing 🙂
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Thank you so much…. glad you liked it… 🙂
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These written Rhymes
Talk of Your Times
You ask for my Blessings
I can bless you of no Missings
Good one Indeed
Continue with the Deed
This one is Beautiful
I have done one for you to say if it is Wonderful.
Ashish! My Dear.
Read My “Distant Heart”.
Shiva
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Thank you so much sir for your lovely comment which is itself a poem. I am glad that you liked my work to that extent which will inspire me to write more on such theme. 🙂
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“Distant Heart”
Is a poem I have written I hope you shall like it.
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Loved this
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Thank you so much… Glad you liked… apologies for my late response…
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