When you gives your delicate smile.
Even the stone breaks with a smile.
Staring look from your face.
Makes me to always look on your face.
The opening of your mouth for talk.
Makes the way for never ending talk.
Sometimes giving a devastating look.
Makes me to have a forever look.
When you make me laugh loud.
That time I really feel proud.
Holding your hands for walk and talk.
I forget the journey of long walk.
The trust binds us forever.
Not aware whether we are made for each other.
As one day we will be detached.
Death is the ultimate truth.
I will miss you…
Your void will be felt.
Only memories will be kept.
Will miss your delicate smile.
Which compels even mountains to dance and joy.
As…
When you gives your delicate smile.
Even the stone breaks with a smile.
– Ashish Kumar
What a beautiful poem, Ashish 😊
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Thank you so much… good you liked it… 🙂
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😊😊😊
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🙂
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It was a sweet, innocent love story 🙂
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Hahaha… Thank you so much… glad you enjoyed reading it… 🙂 Just trying to touch different genre of writing… 🙂
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Beautiful lines, Ashish. Liked your emotions on love. 🙂
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Thank you very much… felt privileged that you appreciated my work… 🙂
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Very nice and dedicated words… Beautifully written! 👌
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Thank you so much… glad you appreciated it… 🙂
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love the last two lines 🙂
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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A powerful smile you have brought up 🙂 Beautiful!
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Thank you so much. Glad you appreciated it. 🙂
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So much love flowing through that poem from beginning to end and the quote is just beautiful.
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Thank you so much mam for liking the poem and for such a nice view. 🙂
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How could I not like such romantic lines? I am helplessly romantic 😊
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Hahaha… That’s so nice… 🙂
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That’s so funny, isn’t it?
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Everyone is romantic and being romantic cannot be said to be funny. 🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Simple and sweet. Loved it
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Welcome to my blog… Thank you so much for liking my poem. Keep visiting. 🙂
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Beautiful Poem 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Awww
Romantic and sweet
Love this
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Welcome to my blog… glad you liked my poem… keep visiting… 🙂
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I’m enjoying it
I will be visiting 😊
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Thank you so much… good to connect here… 🙂
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Hi Ashish, I nominated you for the Starlight Blogger Award. Feel free to participate. Bigh hugs: https://erikakind.wordpress.com/2015/09/15/the-stars-are-shining-brighter-than-ever/
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Thank you so much for considering me for this award… I will reply soon… 🙂
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Sure Ashish! I am glad I had the chance to pass it on to you 🙂
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Your this comment made me glad… thank you so much… 🙂
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You are very welcome, Ashish 🙂
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🙂
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Beautiful. 🙂
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Welcome to my blog. Glad you liked my poem. Keep visiting and rewarding me with your valuable views. 🙂
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Of course. 😀
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This is just amazing!!! As I always say Keep Smiling!!! 😀
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Thank you so much… keep smiling always… 🙂
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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Beautiful verse Ashish. I am smiling! 🙂
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Thank you so much and welcome to my blog…good to have you here… keep visiting and rewarding me with your valuable views… 🙂
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Loved it!!
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Wow
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Lovely lines, loved them!
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Thank you so much for reading and liking my work… Pleased to know the same.. 👍😊🤗
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