Tears coming from the eyes.
Making the way to survive.
Moving slowly across the face.
Trying to capture the entire space.
Mirror image of emotions displayed.
The droplets of water reflected.
Trust broke; betrayal came at sudden stroke.
Living in disguise there was demise of hope.
Poor mind stopped to think.
Ultimately came to stand still.
Body shivered, heart cried.
To accompany, no one ever tried.
Thinking on what was the deed.
Saw only bleed, bleed.
Is crying was really a need?
Visible was only bleed, bleed.
Is anything left for greed?
Present was only bleed, bleed.
The bleed…
Which nobody wants as part of their need.
– Ashish Kumar
Ashish Vision 
It’s full of remorse!
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Saying it a remorse may not be correct fully as the poem talks about betrayal and breaking of trust. If one can look at other side then having trust can be said as a remorse. So your point is also correct at the same time… 🙂
Thanks a lot for the deep view Hasmeet… 🙂
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It reminded me of Gulzar’s song: “Jeene ke liye socha hi na tha dard sambhalne honge….ek aansu chhupa ke rakha tha” from the movie, Masoom.
Hope you don’t mind, if I save it. 🙂
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It will be my pleasure if you do it… 🙂 Thank you for mentioning of that song which is a gem… 🙂
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Really enjoyed your poem
The bleed
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Beautifully penned!
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Thank you very much… 🙂
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Nicely penned as always 🙂
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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You do write so well….I love your poems!
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Thank you so much… glad to know that you like my poems… 🙂
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OMG!!! How amazing was that!!
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Thank you so much… glad you appreciated it… 🙂
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👍🏻👍🏻
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🙂
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it makes one think!!
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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