THE TREE ULTIMATELY FELL


A building which was made by immense struggle and effort.
That collapsed due to a sudden storm.
Collecting the pieces of the collapsed structure.
I lost my own mind and the body structure.
The language and gesture all went in vain.
A sudden surprise, I was left in pain.
I didn’t cried but tears fell.
The tree I planted ultimately fell.

Residing in the narrow passage of my heart, there was a hope.
Searching for the way to convert that hope into a scope.
Loads of loads of trouble were in the queue.
Not aware whether this was a never ending queue.
The journey which I started from the bottom of my heart.
That came in an end which left my heart with  loads of hurt.
I enjoyed that moment a lot.
As I have to build another plot.
The plot with more immune capacity.
That is capable of holding any tragedy.
Hoping to get all is well.
I didn’t cried but tears fell.
Because…
The tree I planted ultimately fell.

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–  Ashish Kumar

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52 thoughts on “THE TREE ULTIMATELY FELL

  1. Nisthur Anadi

    How can you gather these thoughts….
    Without going through that incident??

    If its just imagination than awesome

    If truth than hats off to your courage to built a new plot.

    Ashish ji maan gaye boss.

    Congratulations for new creative piece.

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    1. I am not aware whether there is a specific pattern. I like to touch different things and try to present in a different manner if possible… I am glad that you liked my effort and enjoyed reading it… 🙂

      Like

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