A conversation which started recently.
But failed without ending correctly.
An incomplete gesture of talk.
Concluded in an unwanted walk.
A walk which was lonely from both side.
You took your side, I took my side.
Leaving the journey in between.
We decided not to be seen.
The situation which you never accepted.
Conveying it to you, I never hesitated.
Slowly and gently, we left away.
You moved your way, I moved my way.
The journey came to end before starting.
The house collapsed before building.
Wanted to take a golden bath.
You take your path.
And…
I will take my path.
But… Without any talk.
I will walk and walk… Walk without talk…
– Ashish Kumar
Ashish Vision 
That’s sad I wish somewhere down the road the both paths get to a common route 😀
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Hmmm… Thank you so much for reading and liking this piece of mine Deeshani… 🙂
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very nicely written, I can feel such a situation, walk and walk and get nowhere….
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Thank you so much mam for your valuable words and liking my creation… 🙂
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feelings well expressed………but why sad …….
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It is a try to present in the form of a poem of situation where you have to choose the path: the right path or the wrong path…
Thank you so much for reading and liking it… 🙂
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Beautiful & melancholy.. Paths.. Aah,the dilemma.. 😓😓
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Thanks a lot for liking it. 🙂
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Anytime ashish!! It’s a beautiful piece.
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Thank you for your kind words… 🙂
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May the walls of ego melt and the talk starts again 🙂
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Hmm… Thank you so much. 🙂
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well written ashish 🙂
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Thanks a lot Madhusudan. 🙂
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That walk would have been so painful. But the walk through this poem was a pleasure! 🙂
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Thanks a lot… glad to know that this poem was a pleasurable walk for you… 🙂
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It sure was.. 🙂
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Thanks a lot for liking it… 🙂
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I am listening to How to Save a Life while reading this. The sentiments of these words are flowing into the song.
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That’s a big compliment for me… glad you understood the depth of the poem…Thanks a lot for liking it… 🙂
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very nice poem ashish … very glad to share such a beautiful poems. i love your blog…
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Welcome to my blog… Great to know you like my writing… Keep visiting… 🙂
I will visit your blog soon for sure… 🙂
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Many talks end this way.. Sad but real
Written so nicely
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Thank you that you liked this poem which I tried to write differently… 🙂
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