I walked.
In an unknowing path.
No body was there.
But I was there.
From dawn to dusk.
The road was a lust.
Thorns spread here and there.
But I was there.
When left in dark.
My shadow went from my park.
Burning a candle on the way.
I created my way.
Keeping the dark away from here.
I was there.
Sometimes heart got hurt.
Tried to make a new hut.
That also vanished in storm.
Making the way of one more thorn.
Happily accepted the challenge.
As I knew I can manage.
Not having a sleep.
But from inside, I did bleed.
Inconvenience spread everywhere.
But I was there.
The cycle continues always.
What will happen no body knows.
That is not in our hands.
To beat the unwanted, resists in our hands.
Nothing persist always.
Everything has its ways.
Good and bad moments will come.
The challenge lies in how to overcome.
In the past.
I was there.
And today also…
I am here…
– Ashish Kumar
One must be determined and never lose hope on seeing the hurdles. Such an inspiring poem. 🙂
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yes rightly said… one should not lose patience and hope…
Thank you so much Deeshani for your valuable views… 🙂
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A philosophical take on the ups and downs of life, Nice one Ashish.
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thank you so much… privileged that you appreciated it… 🙂
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Excellent structuring of the poem with powerful words!
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Thank you so much Prajakta for your valuable words… felt glad that you appreciated it… 🙂
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Nice read
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Welcome to my blog… 🙂 honoured to have you here… 🙂 will visit your blog soon… 🙂
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Wonderful lines, Ashish. Very inspirational indeed. Liked the flow & intensity. Conscious efforts always pave the ways. Have a great weekend ahead!
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I am pleased to have this wonderful view on this poem of mine… 🙂 thank you so much for appreciating my effort… happy weekend… 🙂
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positive approach!!!! keep flowing friend!!!nice.. 🙂
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thank you for your wishes…. glad that you liked it… 🙂
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A wonderful poem, Ashish. This should be everyone’s attitude towards life 🙂
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yes , absolutely correct… thank you for reading and liking my work… 🙂
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absolutely amazing lines Ashish 🙂
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Thank you so much…. 🙂
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Inspirational and rhyming….very beautiful 🙂 there is always some positive thought to your poems 🙂
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thank you so much… life should be taken in positive way… thats why I try to give positive touch in my poems… 🙂
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Amazing writeup
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A warm welcome to my blog… Nice to have you here… Thank you so much for reading and liking the poem… Keep visiting… 🙂
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Yes your work is quite fascinating.I will definitely stay hooked up.
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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