In the deep of your heart.
There is a presence of mine.
You never accepted the truth.
And continued to lie.
Even your soul knows your situation.
You always avoid to have the attention.
Giving always the fake smile.
And…
From the mouth.
You continued to lie.
You know I know.
What else do we need to know.
Have nothing to hide.
Come, we will walk side by side.
Invited you for that walk and talk.
You said yes from soul and heart.
But…
From the mouth.
You still continued to lie…
– Ashish Kumar
Oh my God, this is so powerful and amazing.
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Hey, thank you so much… 🙂 glad you liked this small and a try to write a different poem… 🙂
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It’s very good. Me likey!
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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It is so painful and frustrating to sense that a person who means a lot to us is not honest. You wrote that wonderful.
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Thank you so much mam for appreciating this effort of mine to write in a different manner… 🙂 felt privileged to know that you liked it… 🙂
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And I am happy that I am connected with you in order to read such wonderful written pieces. 😊
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Thank you so much… its my pleasure too to connect with you… 🙂
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Win-win…right? 😊
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yes… apsolutely right… 🙂
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😉
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🙂
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“You continued to lie”…..so broad meaning it contains……love and silence though speaking!!!!…nice try!!!!
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hahaha… thank you so much… 🙂 it was a try from my side to write in a different manner… glad that you liked it… 🙂
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Of “silence through speaking” I am guilty. True comment.
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thank you!! 🙂
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Hey Ashish this is such a heart felt poem my friend. . Made me wonder why is the girl hiding her feelings. . Lovely lovely my friend 🙂
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hahaha… thank you so much for liking it and appreciating it… 🙂 i tried to write a different one and i am glad that you liked it… 🙂 keep visiting… 🙂
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Yeah.. It was awesome Ashish.. Keep it up 🙂
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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😊😀☺
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🙂
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Poignant lines, Ashish. Liked reading this poem 🙂
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Thank you very much. 🙂 Glad that you appreciated this effort of mine. 🙂
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This is so straight from the heart, is this for real? I am moved!
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Na na, it was a try to write a different one. Kaha jata hai n ki “kuch kavitayen likhi nhi jati , likha jati hai”. Ye unhi kavitayon me se ek hai. 🙂
I am pleased to know that you liked my effort. Thank you so much. 🙂
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Wow powerful poem indeed 🙂
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welcome to my blog… 🙂
glad that you liked the poem… keep visiting… 🙂
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This is very nice.
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Welcome to my blog sir… thank you so much for liking the poem… keep visiting… 🙂
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Lovely Poem…Powerful words!
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thank you so much Madhusudan… 🙂
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Lovely words!
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Welcome to my blog… good to know that you liked my work… keep visiting… 🙂
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Sure 🙂
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thank you so much… 🙂
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Hi! 🙂 I’ve nominated you for the LOVE/HATE CHALLENGE. Check my post here- https://karunaarora.wordpress.com/2015/07/13/lovehate-challenge/
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Thank you so much for the nomination… glad to know this… 🙂
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gr8! high quality, emotional ! super classssssss ! 🙂 she has to come ,no option for her after these words ! 😛
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hey thank you so much… 🙂 glad that you liked my this effort… 🙂 keep visiting… 🙂
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Beautiful lines, Ashish. Best part of it is that it can be interpreted both, positively as well as negatively.
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yes, you pointed out correctly… it can be interpreted both positively and negatively…
Thank you so much for reading and liking the poem… 🙂
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most enjoyable read… I really like this and the sunflower picture is most touching. nicely done.. thank you. Michelle
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thank you so much mam… felt privileged for your visit here and appreciating my work… keep visiting… 🙂
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moving… and very powerful… love the use of the same sentence… it makes the poem even more intriguing… 🙂
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thank you so much… glad that you appreciated my work… 🙂
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Profound work, Ashish. Some never learn to embrace truth.
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Thank you so much mam for liking the poem… 🙂 felt glad that you appreciated it… 🙂
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You speak truth, friend. I am guilty… it ends with regret.
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Welcome to my blog… 🙂 good to see you here…
yes this poem ends in a regret and it was a try from my side to write a poem with different taste… 🙂 keep visiting… 🙂
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Love the strong emotions the words convey…
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Thank you very much… privileged that you liked the poem… 🙂
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