…YOU CONTINUED TO LIE…


In the deep of your heart.
There is a presence of mine.
You never accepted the truth.
And continued to lie.

Even your soul knows your situation.
You always avoid to have the attention.
Giving always the fake smile.
And…
From the mouth.
You continued to lie.

You know I know.
What else do we need to know.
Have nothing to hide.
Come, we will walk side by side.
Invited you for that walk and talk.
You said yes from soul and heart.
But…
From the mouth.
You still continued to lie…

Sad-Sunflower

– Ashish Kumar

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52 thoughts on “…YOU CONTINUED TO LIE…

  1. Erika Kind July 11, 2015 / 1:11 am

    It is so painful and frustrating to sense that a person who means a lot to us is not honest. You wrote that wonderful.

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  2. Chandan July 11, 2015 / 11:25 am

    “You continued to lie”…..so broad meaning it contains……love and silence though speaking!!!!…nice try!!!!

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    • Ashish kumar July 11, 2015 / 11:26 am

      hahaha… thank you so much… πŸ™‚ it was a try from my side to write in a different manner… glad that you liked it… πŸ™‚

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  3. Himali Shah July 11, 2015 / 11:34 am

    Hey Ashish this is such a heart felt poem my friend. . Made me wonder why is the girl hiding her feelings. . Lovely lovely my friend πŸ™‚

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    • Ashish kumar July 11, 2015 / 11:36 am

      hahaha… thank you so much for liking it and appreciating it… πŸ™‚ i tried to write a different one and i am glad that you liked it… πŸ™‚ keep visiting… πŸ™‚

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    • Ashish kumar July 12, 2015 / 10:45 am

      Thank you very much. πŸ™‚ Glad that you appreciated this effort of mine. πŸ™‚

      Like

    • Ashish kumar July 12, 2015 / 10:48 am

      Na na, it was a try to write a different one. Kaha jata hai n ki “kuch kavitayen likhi nhi jati , likha jati hai”. Ye unhi kavitayon me se ek hai. πŸ™‚
      I am pleased to know that you liked my effort. Thank you so much. πŸ™‚

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    • Ashish kumar July 12, 2015 / 10:59 pm

      welcome to my blog… πŸ™‚
      glad that you liked the poem… keep visiting… πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

    • Ashish kumar July 13, 2015 / 9:22 am

      Welcome to my blog sir… thank you so much for liking the poem… keep visiting… πŸ™‚

      Like

  4. msmahawar333 July 13, 2015 / 7:49 am

    Lovely Poem…Powerful words!

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  5. Itsmine July 13, 2015 / 1:51 pm

    gr8! high quality, emotional ! super classssssss ! πŸ™‚ she has to come ,no option for her after these words ! πŸ˜›

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    • Ashish kumar July 13, 2015 / 6:47 pm

      hey thank you so much… πŸ™‚ glad that you liked my this effort… πŸ™‚ keep visiting… πŸ™‚

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  6. Ravish Mani July 14, 2015 / 1:19 am

    Beautiful lines, Ashish. Best part of it is that it can be interpreted both, positively as well as negatively.

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    • Ashish kumar July 14, 2015 / 9:44 am

      yes, you pointed out correctly… it can be interpreted both positively and negatively…
      Thank you so much for reading and liking the poem… πŸ™‚

      Like

  7. cote8050 July 14, 2015 / 7:55 am

    most enjoyable read… I really like this and the sunflower picture is most touching. nicely done.. thank you. Michelle

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    • Ashish kumar July 14, 2015 / 9:45 am

      thank you so much mam… felt privileged for your visit here and appreciating my work… keep visiting… πŸ™‚

      Like

  8. Archana Kapoor July 14, 2015 / 5:43 pm

    moving… and very powerful… love the use of the same sentence… it makes the poem even more intriguing… πŸ™‚

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    • Ashish kumar July 14, 2015 / 5:45 pm

      thank you so much… glad that you appreciated my work… πŸ™‚

      Like

    • Ashish kumar July 14, 2015 / 10:50 pm

      Thank you so much mam for liking the poem… πŸ™‚ felt glad that you appreciated it… πŸ™‚

      Like

    • Ashish kumar July 15, 2015 / 10:02 pm

      Welcome to my blog… πŸ™‚ good to see you here…
      yes this poem ends in a regret and it was a try from my side to write a poem with different taste… πŸ™‚ keep visiting… πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

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