Some sort of worry.
Some sort of tension.
Battling with them is always awesome.
Holding those condition beside me.
Although..
I survived.
But…
I lost myself.
Meeting with unwanted situation.
Hearing always taunting conversation.
Made me to think for sometime.
Do people also bark?
Although…
I survived.
But…
I lost myself.
The battle continues.
Not thought of taking rest.
As the life goes on.
I will move on.
The path is not easy.
Will keep myself busy.
Obstacles will come for sure.
I won’t give up, that is for sure.
Stones will be thrown on my way.
with that stones will make my way.
Even my soul can get tired.
But I won’t.
At that time…
I will survive.
And…
I will beat the…
Worry and tension,
Unwanted situation and taunting conversation.
– Ashish Kumar
The essence of perseverance is well captured in the poem.
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very well written…. 🙂
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Very well expressed 🙂
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Well-expressed Ashish!
I survived.
But…
I lost myself….loved these lines… 🙂
Keep writing*Keep inspiring….
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Keep writing such beautiful verses…Keep us enthralled with your magical pen..Tc 🙂
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Will always try for sure. 🙂
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beautifully written!
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Wow! So much behind these words. The chorus, “I survived but I lost myself” Simply Amazing.
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courage well captured! all the best!
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Welcome to my blog. Felt privileged that you liked my effort. Keep visiting and motivating me with your valuble views. 🙂
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Positive words.
May we all continue to try & of course survive 🙂
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yes… life is a battle… we have to fight and survive… 🙂
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Innocence gets lost when people behave nasty, nicely put!
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Thank you so much… glad that you appreciated my effort in this poem… 🙂
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so realistic… 🙂
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Welcome to my blog Viren… good that you liked my poem… keep visiting and motivating me with your valuable views… 🙂
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wow! I am glad i did not miss this on reading. I like the theme of the poem. The indentation and formatting makes it more attractive.
The way confidence is built in the poem is just awesome! such a pleasure read! 🙂
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Thank you so much for this wonderful view which will inspire md to write more on this theme in future too. 🙂
Always need your blessings. Keep visiting. 🙂
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Pleasure is always mine! 🙂
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Inspiring and encouraging lines. Persistence. Great!
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Thank you so much sir… 🙂
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