…I SURVIVED AND WILL SURVIVE…


 

Some sort of worry.
 Some sort of tension.
 Battling with them is always awesome.
 Holding those condition beside me.
 Although..
 I survived.
 But…
 I lost myself.

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Meeting with unwanted situation.
Hearing always taunting conversation.
Made me to think for sometime.
Do people also bark?
Although…
I survived.
But…
I lost myself.

 

The battle continues.
Not thought of taking rest.
As the life goes on.
I will move on.
The path is not easy.
Will keep myself busy.
Obstacles will come for sure.
I won’t give up, that is for sure.
Stones will be thrown on my way.
with that stones will make my way.
Even my soul can get tired.
But I won’t.
At that time…
I will survive.
And…
I will beat the…
Worry and tension,
Unwanted situation and taunting conversation.

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– Ashish Kumar

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30 thoughts on “…I SURVIVED AND WILL SURVIVE…

  1. Archana Kapoor June 18, 2015 / 6:07 pm

    very well written…. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    • Ashish kumar June 18, 2015 / 6:08 pm

      Thank you so much… felt good that you appreciated it… keep visiting… 🙂

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  2. Itsmine June 18, 2015 / 6:48 pm

    Very well expressed 🙂

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  3. Ruchi Chopra June 19, 2015 / 4:07 am

    Well-expressed Ashish!
    I survived.
    But…
    I lost myself….loved these lines… 🙂
    Keep writing*Keep inspiring….

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    • Ashish kumar June 19, 2015 / 9:24 am

      Thank you so much… glad that you appreciated my effort to present a different poem… keep visiting and motivating me with your valuable views… 🙂

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      • Ruchi Chopra June 19, 2015 / 11:08 pm

        Keep writing such beautiful verses…Keep us enthralled with your magical pen..Tc 🙂

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      • Ashish kumar June 19, 2015 / 11:40 pm

        Thank you so much for your kind words. Will always try for sure. 🙂

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  4. msmahawar333 June 19, 2015 / 8:41 am

    beautifully written!

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  5. preetixd June 19, 2015 / 10:15 am

    Wow! So much behind these words. The chorus, “I survived but I lost myself” Simply Amazing.

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    • Ashish kumar June 20, 2015 / 6:36 pm

      Welcome to my blog. Felt privileged that you liked my effort. Keep visiting and motivating me with your valuble views. 🙂

      Like

  6. Anita June 21, 2015 / 5:42 pm

    Positive words.
    May we all continue to try & of course survive 🙂

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    • Ashish kumar June 22, 2015 / 10:03 am

      yes… life is a battle… we have to fight and survive… 🙂
      Thank you so much for liking it… keep visiting… 🙂

      Like

    • Ashish kumar June 23, 2015 / 12:49 pm

      Welcome to my blog Viren… good that you liked my poem… keep visiting and motivating me with your valuable views… 🙂

      Like

  7. Prakash Hegade July 7, 2015 / 6:59 pm

    wow! I am glad i did not miss this on reading. I like the theme of the poem. The indentation and formatting makes it more attractive.
    The way confidence is built in the poem is just awesome! such a pleasure read! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    • Ashish kumar July 7, 2015 / 7:32 pm

      Thank you so much for this wonderful view which will inspire md to write more on this theme in future too. 🙂
      Always need your blessings. Keep visiting. 🙂

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