When I walk, i see you walking with me.
Holding my hands, slowly looking at me.
When i speak, i see you speaking with me.
Moving your lips, slowly talking with me.
You are the one who always comes in my dreams.
I don’t know whether i am in a dream.
Sometimes giving a devastating look at my face.
That time i really like your face.
When the light come, you disappear.
In the dark, you again appear.
Not allowing me to sleep.
Don’t know whether you take a sleep.
Are you a nightwatchman?
Or…
You are looking in me as your man.
“Who are you” is the only question to be answered.
Let it be as there it is, I don’t need any answer.
Never saw you with open eyes.
Then also want to knot a tie.
Got many gifts and presents.
But your presence is the ultimate “present”.
The presence which is not visible. As you have an “invisible presence”.
– Ashish Kumar
Lovely poem but sad…. I have a man in my life but he comes and goes mostly in darkness, doesn’t want a real relationship, just someone to be with when the mood hits him so he is very much like a man in my dreams, so hard to take sometimes… but, thank you for sharing your work, very well done. Michelle
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I would like to welcome you at my blog. Honored to have your views here.
Yes sometimes its hard to be with it as you mentioned.
Thank you so much for sharing your views which will encourage me to write better.
Thank you for appreciating my imagination which i penned down in the form of a poem. I am delighted. Keep visiting and motivating me with your valuable views. 🙂
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I look forward to read much more of your work!!
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Sure. I will be posting my work frequently. Keep visiting. 🙂
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Some relationships are like that. Lovely poem.
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Thank you very much mam for appreciating my effort. 🙂
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it was really awesome 🙂 🙂 great job 🙂 🙂
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Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. Keep visiting. 🙂
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That was worded beautifully. Sadly, some remain just a dream for our entire life.
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Welcome to my blog Kritika. Thank you for stopping by and sharing your views. Keep visiting. 🙂
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I really liked this one…quite contrasting lines with good rhyming.
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Thank you so much sir for liking my effort. Glad to know that you liked it. Keep visiting and motivating me with your valuable views… 🙂
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You can just address me Alok, that would be more personal 🙂
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Ok. I will address you the way you want. 🙂
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Its thought of most of the which is beautifully crafted in a poem by you. I liked it so much.
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Thank you for sharing your views. Welcome to my blog Avisek. keep visiting. 🙂
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All Relationships are like that. Lovely poem good one……
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Welcome to my blog. Thank you so much for liking my poem. Keep visiting and motivating me with your valuable views. 🙂
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not all relationships need a recognition or face, some are better unnamed 🙂 beautifully penned!
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Yes, you are right… some are better unnamed.
Thank you so much for liking it and sharing your views here. I am glad that you appreciated it. Keep visiting… 🙂
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Beautiful poem; but illusive presence may sometimes be deceptive though there are the occasions when one wants this hide and seek going on because of uncertainty of things in our life.
Anyhow thanks sharing.
:))
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Thank you for reading and sharing your views… This poem is not related to my personal life. I am trying to touch different different topics in a different way and trying to write better as much as i can. 🙂
Always needs your wishes. Thank you for stopping by. keep visiting. 🙂
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A writer is universal in nature. Everything touches him/her whereinsoever he/she experiences something he/she wants others also to know and get benefit. Not necessarily, a part of experience of the person concerned yet everything touches the emotional chord of a writer.
Whenever I write, I write although it all were my story or narrative. Just immerse in that narrative and find the difference.
Anyhow, the journey ahead is smooth for one who wants to excel. If you want prove your worth, it would be done with God’s grace.
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Thank you so much for your wishes. I totally agree with your view that a writer is universal in nature and i will try to abide by it. Thanks a lot. Your views are precious for me… Keep visiting. 🙂
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My pleasure. :))
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It’s sad, yet you have penned it so beautifully 🙂 Sometimes, we meet such people in our life, I guess, thinking about it doesn’t help at all, all we must do is stay strong and work towards a better life.
Best wishes,
Shambhavi
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Yes we should move forward… This poem is a try from my side to write something different in a different manner…
Thank you so much for stopping by. Felt glad that you liked dit…Keep visiting and motivating me with your valuable views… 🙂
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Yes, indeed. 🙂 It’s a great try and I will try to leave my thoughts on your posts 😀 Your posts are refreshing and quite perspective!
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Thank you so much for your appreciation… You are always welcome. 🙂 Its an achievement for me that my posts are liked by good bloggers and i will always try to keep it up to the expectations… 🙂
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Thank you so much! 🙂 Your words are accepted happily! ^_^
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🙂 Hahah…. Thank you for accepting… 🙂
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You have written it so beautifully.
Really good one.Hope to read more of your amazing poems. 🙂
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Welcome to my blog… Nice to know that you liked my work… 🙂
Sure i will be posting my poems,articles and quotations… Keep visiting and motivating me with your valuable views. 🙂
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It’s My pleasure to read Your blogs which will motivate me. 🙂
Have a great day ahead. 😀
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Pleasure is all mine. Thank you so much… 🙂
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This one is one of your best! Excellently Done! 🙂
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Thank you so much… Glad that you liked it… keep visiting… 🙂
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It was pleasure reading.. 🙂
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Thank you so much… felt good that you appreciated it… 🙂
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