A dew of dust coming from everywhere.
Want to destroy them forever.
An unexpected tie-up between desert and rain.
That left me to walk in vain.
Noting the sensation of the wind.
For a moment, made me to stand still.
Things might happen which are obscene.
Now its time to clear all those “scene”.
Fighting spirit is needed sometime.
That will carry you ahead of time.
Tolerating the taunting situation in light and dark.
Made me to think “how people can bark?”
Its time to wait…
Because,
the wind will change its direction.
As
” every action has an equal and opposite reaction.”
– by Ashish kumar
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It’s a complex and thought provoking mix of emotions. The ending is lovely as there is a note of positivity in it. Lovely writing Ashish 🙂
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thanx a lot mam… glad that you liked my effort… 🙂
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Nice, Sorry I took so long to comment. It has a lot of depth. Keep writing…always.
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thankyou very much Alpanaji for giving your valuable views… its always an honour to have your views… 🙂
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simply awesome!! It signifies the title..keep it up!
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thankyou so much… 🙂
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really a nice poem…very simple and beautifully written
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thank you very much for liking my work…
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Awesome… well done ashish ! keep writing…..
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Thankyou so much. Keep motivating me with your valuable views Aishwarya. 🙂
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The poem is an answer of an aching heart to a not so pleasant treatment to it. I like the verses, the language and the flow of emotions. Thank you Ashish for sharing this.
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Thankyou so much for appreciating my work and liking it. Its always been a pleasure to have your views.
You have correctly pointed the emotions of the poem in your comment which relates of aching of heart. Thanks again and keep visiting. 🙂
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A pint of desolation , A quart of new resolutions and bulks of new hope…. quite a good mix…
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First of all i would like you to welcome at my blog. 🙂
Thankyou for reading and giving your views on that. I have tried to give a glimpse of both sorrow and hope in this poem as you have also pointed in your comment. I can say your comment is a summary of this poem… Keep visiting and rewarding me with your valuable views. 🙂
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