A dew of dust coming from everywhere.

Want to destroy them forever.

An unexpected tie-up between desert and rain.

That left me to walk in vain.   



Noting the sensation of the wind.

For a moment, made me to stand still.

Things might happen which are obscene.

Now its time to clear all those “scene”.


Fighting spirit is needed sometime.

That will carry you ahead of time.

Tolerating the taunting situation in light and dark.

Made me to think “how people can bark?”


Its time to wait…


the wind will change its direction.


every action has an equal and opposite reaction.”




– by Ashish kumar




14 thoughts on “…SORROW AND HOPE…

  1. Saru (@PerfectOdyssey) June 5, 2013 / 5:00 am

    It’s a complex and thought provoking mix of emotions. The ending is lovely as there is a note of positivity in it. Lovely writing Ashish 🙂


    • Ashish kumar July 13, 2013 / 2:34 pm

      thanx a lot mam… glad that you liked my effort… 🙂


  2. Alpana Jaiswal June 14, 2013 / 10:53 pm

    Nice, Sorry I took so long to comment. It has a lot of depth. Keep writing…always.


    • Ashish kumar July 13, 2013 / 2:33 pm

      thankyou very much Alpanaji for giving your valuable views… its always an honour to have your views… 🙂


  3. Chandan June 17, 2013 / 4:23 pm

    simply awesome!! It signifies the title..keep it up!


  4. Anupama Sinha July 13, 2013 / 9:37 pm

    really a nice poem…very simple and beautifully written


  5. Aishwarya Soni July 16, 2013 / 12:55 am

    Awesome… well done ashish ! keep writing…..


    • Ashish kumar July 16, 2013 / 1:09 am

      Thankyou so much. Keep motivating me with your valuable views Aishwarya. 🙂


  6. shwetadave09 October 31, 2014 / 10:54 pm

    The poem is an answer of an aching heart to a not so pleasant treatment to it. I like the verses, the language and the flow of emotions. Thank you Ashish for sharing this.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Ashish kumar October 31, 2014 / 11:04 pm

      Thankyou so much for appreciating my work and liking it. Its always been a pleasure to have your views.
      You have correctly pointed the emotions of the poem in your comment which relates of aching of heart. Thanks again and keep visiting. 🙂


  7. Ahtesam October 31, 2014 / 11:21 pm

    A pint of desolation , A quart of new resolutions and bulks of new hope…. quite a good mix…


    • Ashish kumar October 31, 2014 / 11:34 pm

      First of all i would like you to welcome at my blog. 🙂
      Thankyou for reading and giving your views on that. I have tried to give a glimpse of both sorrow and hope in this poem as you have also pointed in your comment. I can say your comment is a summary of this poem… Keep visiting and rewarding me with your valuable views. 🙂


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