बाज़ार |


धू – धू  कर जलती सपनों की दास्ताँ |
शहादत में मिली है ज़ख्मों का कारवां |
लाखों हैं यहाँ बनावटी  चेहरे |
हर वक़्त देते हैं बेवजह पहरे |

शब्दों का कोई मोल नहीं |
भरोसा किसी पर नहीं |
लोग यहाँ मिलते हैं हर रोज़ |
बना देते हैं हर बात का गठजोर |

इन्सान इन्सान का नहीं होता |
इसलिए तो हर क़दम पर वो है रोता |
ये दुनिया है एक ऐसा बाज़ार |
जहाँ सबकुछ होता  है तार – तार |

खून के आंसुओ को भी पीना परता है कभी |
दिल रोता है तो मनाना  भी परता है कभी |
कौन सुनता है यहाँ किसी की आवाज़ |
इसलिए तो कहते हैं : ” दफना दिया करो हर राज़ |”
क्यूंकि …
ये दुनिया है एक ” अनोखा बाज़ार …”

– आशीष कुमार

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33 thoughts on “बाज़ार |

  1. Saru Singhal February 4, 2013 / 4:02 am

    True, it's like a market place where everything can be bought or sold. Sigh! what have we become. 😦

    Profound work Ashish!

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  2. Anshul Gautam February 4, 2013 / 3:35 pm

    this poem comes as a masterpiece from your pen, Ashish. 🙂

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  3. hridyanubhuti February 5, 2013 / 10:07 pm

    बहुत बहुत सुन्दर रचना ,यथार्थ से रूबरू कराती हुई। हर शब्द कह रहा है हाँ ! ” ये दुनिया है एक अनोखा बाज़ार ”

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  4. Dheeraj Kumar February 9, 2013 / 8:41 pm

    kya bat h ye poem tere sabd dhara me kuch jyada hi special lag rha h…………keep it up

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  5. Ashish kumar February 12, 2013 / 9:26 pm

    thankyou so much mam for liking my effort… i am delighted that you liked it… 🙂

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  6. Ashish kumar February 12, 2013 / 9:27 pm

    thankyou so much. glad to know from a master who is saying my work is a “masterpiece.”
    keep visiting..

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  7. Ashish kumar February 12, 2013 / 9:29 pm

    bahut bahut dhanyawad indu mam jo apko meri rachna acchi lagi… apki pratikriya se mujhe bahut acha laga… aise hi mera hausla badhate rahiye…

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  8. Ashish kumar February 12, 2013 / 9:29 pm

    i welcome you to my blog… good to know that you appreciated my effort… keep visiting…

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  9. Anupama Sinha February 12, 2013 / 11:14 pm

    reality of life….nice poem

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  10. Alpana Jaiswal February 13, 2013 / 6:36 pm

    We accept the reality of the world with which we are presented……Each person’s reality is simply their perspective. There is an objective reality and then there’s the 'truth' that has been shaped by human experience and emotion. Truth is often intentionally or unintentionally obscured by individuals pursuing outcomes different that those of harsh reality. There is always more to life than we know.
    Very well written!

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  11. saurab kumar February 16, 2013 / 11:21 pm

    truely ours life match with the particular word..”Bazar”..awsome lyns bhaiya…….:)

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  12. expression February 22, 2013 / 1:27 pm

    बहुत सुन्दर कविता…
    भाव अच्छे हैं….
    indiblog में आपका मेसेज देख यहाँ आना हुआ.
    लिखते रहिये…
    शुभकामनाएं!!!
    अनु
    ps- “परता” है को “पड़ता” कर लीजिये.

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  13. Ashish kumar February 26, 2013 / 10:01 pm

    truly said alpanaji ” each person's reality is simply their perspective “…
    i am delighted to know that you liked my effort of presenting a harsh reality… thanx a lot…

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  14. Ashish kumar February 26, 2013 / 10:03 pm

    shukriya anu mam jo apko meri kavita pasand ayi… mujhe bahut khushi hui jo apne meri koshish ko saraha… keep motivating me mam…

    regards,
    ashish

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  15. Ashish kumar February 26, 2013 / 10:04 pm

    thankyou gajadhar ji for liking my poem… keep visiting and motivating mew from your valuable views…

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  16. Ashish kumar June 30, 2013 / 10:18 pm

    Thankyou very much.
    Mujhe khushi hai ki tumhe meri kavita pasand ayi. 🙂

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  17. Amit Kashyap October 26, 2013 / 6:35 pm

    sachayio ke bich haqiqat izhar h ye….
    waqt ke sahi chehre ka didar h ye….
    kis tarah bik rhi h ye dunia….
    sab ko kehta “baazar” hai ye…

    bhut achchha,haqiqat ko apne bhut se se byan kiye…..

    god bless you….

    likhte rahiye……

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