A fire is burning.
Making the scope of big hope.
But before reaching its destination.
Suddenly came to an end, all the scope.




Again it started with lots of determination.
Facing happily all the irking situation.
Withstanding his decision to continue to burn.
Obstacles arriving at every junction.
Depression coming many times.
Frustration trying to pull him down.
He wanted to cry but convinced himself by saying ” I WILL NOT CRY BUT TEARS WILL FALL.
And one day…
God came for his help but he refused to take any favor of him.
God asked why???
He replied : ” I DON’T BELIEVE IN GOD  but… I like to go to temple and spend time there. ”

Many storm came and the fire is still burning.
Rainfall, snowfall had failed to do much and he is still standing. 

Underestimating all those taunting words of stepping down because…
he has full faith to reach its crown.

And… The fire is still burning.

Fire! Keep burning…

– Ashish kumar

15 thoughts on “…THE FIRE…

  1. vicky kumar November 23, 2012 / 10:39 pm

    nice lines yaar!!


  2. Anuj verma November 23, 2012 / 11:02 pm

    Impressive lines… 🙂


    • Ashish kumar November 23, 2012 / 11:51 pm

      a very warm welcome at my blog anuj…
      felt good to know that you liked my post… keep visiting 🙂


  3. Namrata Kumari November 24, 2012 / 10:23 am

    Struggle and hope when combined leads to success. A very hopeful and optimistic poem. 🙂


    • Ashish kumar November 24, 2012 / 11:06 pm

      thank you namrata for liking and giving your valuable view on it… thanx a lot 🙂


  4. Aishwarya November 24, 2012 / 11:10 pm

    fabulous job Ashish ! heart touching lines…. really… its amazing 🙂


    • Ashish kumar November 24, 2012 / 11:12 pm

      thank you so much for such a praising… i am delighted… keep visiting 🙂


      • Aishwarya November 24, 2012 / 11:22 pm

        sure! all d best 4 ur nxt poem 🙂


      • Ashish kumar November 24, 2012 / 11:26 pm

        hahaha… advance wishes.. thank you so much aishwarya for your well wishes… 🙂


  5. Manish November 25, 2012 / 1:01 am

    I think these lines are resembling those person’s life who lives their dream…….they don’t need favor……..great compose Ashish 🙂


    • Ashish kumar November 25, 2012 / 1:06 am

      a very warm welcome at my blog manish bhaiya… i am delighted to have your views on that… keep motivating me with your valuable views… 🙂


  6. Alpana Jaiswal January 20, 2013 / 12:16 pm

    Well written……..no matter what happens in life,be strong, and keep moving on.


    • Ashish kumar July 13, 2013 / 2:35 pm

      yes we must move on irrespective of the prevailing circumstances…


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