…SILENCE…


(… this poem is something of different taste. Check this and i hope your time will not be wasted. Please have a look at it …)

When i woke up there is a silence.
When i get ready there is a silence.
When i walk there is a silence.
When i work there is a silence.

Showing my sympathy to everyone.
Giving them all which i also can’t afford.
Always ready to help everyone.
But when i need who will give me support.

Silence…
Loosing my patience.
Silence…
Creating a big difference.
Silence…
Having my sentiments of cost of only one pence.

Sun rises daily but when i will rise.
Sun sets daily but i never set.
Flowers have fragrance and i have only disgrace.
Each one is having a dream but when my dream will become a cream.

I hear noise everytime.
But then also there is a silence.
I see happiness everywhere.
But then also there is a depression.

Silence silence everywhere.
Don’t know the place to live where.
Moving in a dark area where there is a candle but i am unable to see the light.
No strength left for fight.

Silence…
When it will be out???

– by Ashish kumar

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22 thoughts on “…SILENCE…

  1. ananya chatterjee November 6, 2011 / 10:43 pm

    –<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>– KEEP IT UP :))))

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    • Ashish kumar November 6, 2011 / 10:51 pm

      thanku ananya… thanks a lot.

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  2. ananya chatterjee November 6, 2011 / 10:45 pm

    WOWWWWWW

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  3. sayanimukherjee November 6, 2011 / 11:14 pm

    hmm….like it… but there is a sad feeling in it… r u sad? do u feel that u r not good enough? do u feel alone? cause if u do…then stop thinking that way….this life is a precious gift…u shud embrace life in every way….happiness, once lost, is difficult to regain….dont let ur happiness leave u….

    …..n if u r all ok….n its just the general mood of the write-up n not a reflection of ur own mood…i must say…well written!

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    • Ashish kumar November 6, 2011 / 11:45 pm

      thanku sayani didi… yes i m sad sometime, thats why i wrote this… well thanks for liking my work
      i feel sad sometimes.
      As u said life is precious and i will prevail it… its the matter of time that sometimes everyone feel sad and thats why i tried to penned it. THANKU FOR UR VALUABLE COMMENT. UR COMMENTS ALWAYS INSPIRE ME A LOT….

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  4. PLAHA SATNAM SINGH November 6, 2011 / 11:38 pm

    Awsome!!!!
    It has really touched my heart………
    Keep it up!
    🙂

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    • Ashish kumar November 6, 2011 / 11:46 pm

      thanku very much… thanks for ur appreciation

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  5. ravee kant singh November 7, 2011 / 12:06 am

    That was nice.n now i can really feel that we have a budding writer with us

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    • Ashish kumar November 7, 2011 / 12:09 am

      oh thanku so much. i hope this wish of urs comes true.. thankyou

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  6. Anshul November 7, 2011 / 12:53 am

    good one. 🙂

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    • Ashish kumar November 9, 2011 / 1:09 pm

      thanku… thanks a lot… 🙂

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    • Ashish kumar November 9, 2011 / 1:08 pm

      hiii geet singhji… i welcome u to my blog… thanku for viewing my poem and putting ur comment too… keep visiting my blog… thanku.

      regards,
      ashish kumar

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  7. Suman Iyanger November 9, 2011 / 1:42 pm

    written nicely dear but has a loneliness feeling in it..
    is everythng ok???nd abt da writing,i must say–u rite fabulous…:)

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    • Ashish kumar November 9, 2011 / 1:49 pm

      thanku suman didi…. thanks for liking it…
      everything is ok… sometimes it happens after all its life…
      ur comment inspire me for writing better… thanks a lot…

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  8. upendra July 7, 2012 / 11:52 am

    Silence silence…….it was amazing .

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  9. Aastha July 8, 2012 / 11:10 pm

    Suprv job…!!
    Hme v de do thoda apna ye talent…
    Vry vry nice poem….!!
    Bsd on truth….:)

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    • Ashish kumar July 12, 2012 / 1:25 pm

      HAHAA…. Thankx a lot for a lovely response… 🙂

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  10. Ekta October 4, 2012 / 2:12 am

    heyy ashu….well job dear! once again ur dis throw made me speechless……..
    no doubt u r a vry good thinker!!!!! i wish i cud b…..:)

    speech is g8 bt silence is greater smtimes .so dn’t let it b go at all !!!!! 🙂

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