(… this poem is something of different taste. Check this and i hope your time will not be wasted. Please have a look at it …)
When i woke up there is a silence.
When i get ready there is a silence.
When i walk there is a silence.
When i work there is a silence.
Showing my sympathy to everyone.
Giving them all which i also can’t afford.
Always ready to help everyone.
But when i need who will give me support.
Silence…
Loosing my patience.
Silence…
Creating a big difference.
Silence…
Having my sentiments of cost of only one pence.
Sun rises daily but when i will rise.
Sun sets daily but i never set.
Flowers have fragrance and i have only disgrace.
Each one is having a dream but when my dream will become a cream.
I hear noise everytime.
But then also there is a silence.
I see happiness everywhere.
But then also there is a depression.
Silence silence everywhere.
Don’t know the place to live where.
Moving in a dark area where there is a candle but i am unable to see the light.
No strength left for fight.
Silence…
When it will be out???
– by Ashish kumar
Ashish Vision 
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thanku ananya… thanks a lot.
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WOWWWWWW
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hmm….like it… but there is a sad feeling in it… r u sad? do u feel that u r not good enough? do u feel alone? cause if u do…then stop thinking that way….this life is a precious gift…u shud embrace life in every way….happiness, once lost, is difficult to regain….dont let ur happiness leave u….
…..n if u r all ok….n its just the general mood of the write-up n not a reflection of ur own mood…i must say…well written!
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thanku sayani didi… yes i m sad sometime, thats why i wrote this… well thanks for liking my work
i feel sad sometimes.
As u said life is precious and i will prevail it… its the matter of time that sometimes everyone feel sad and thats why i tried to penned it. THANKU FOR UR VALUABLE COMMENT. UR COMMENTS ALWAYS INSPIRE ME A LOT….
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Awsome!!!!
It has really touched my heart………
Keep it up!
🙂
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thanku very much… thanks for ur appreciation
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That was nice.n now i can really feel that we have a budding writer with us
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oh thanku so much. i hope this wish of urs comes true.. thankyou
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good one. 🙂
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thanku… thanks a lot… 🙂
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awesome ..wow:)
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hiii geet singhji… i welcome u to my blog… thanku for viewing my poem and putting ur comment too… keep visiting my blog… thanku.
regards,
ashish kumar
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written nicely dear but has a loneliness feeling in it..
is everythng ok???nd abt da writing,i must say–u rite fabulous…:)
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thanku suman didi…. thanks for liking it…
everything is ok… sometimes it happens after all its life…
ur comment inspire me for writing better… thanks a lot…
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Silence silence…….it was amazing .
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thank you…
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Suprv job…!!
Hme v de do thoda apna ye talent…
Vry vry nice poem….!!
Bsd on truth….:)
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HAHAA…. Thankx a lot for a lovely response… 🙂
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At times, silence is hard to accept. Nicely written!
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thankyou saru mam for liking it…
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heyy ashu….well job dear! once again ur dis throw made me speechless……..
no doubt u r a vry good thinker!!!!! i wish i cud b…..:)
speech is g8 bt silence is greater smtimes .so dn’t let it b go at all !!!!! 🙂
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