(My this poem is a feeling that most of us is having in our mind. Hope that u will like my work and u will definately enjoy it. Have a look at it….)
My arms are stretching for you.
My heart is crying for you.
My soul is dying for you.
My emotions are scattering for you.
When you will be mine, i don’t know.
When you will come with me i don’t know.
I have lots of proposals.
Converted all of them into disposal.
Just for you….
Making all effort to achieve you.
Don’t know why you are giving no response?
Just say once i will do everything for you.
But please don’t make your decision a suspense.
I want you no doubt.
I care for you no doubt.
Just give me a positive sign dear i will be forever for you.
But its really true that “I WANT YOU”…………..
So honest feelings…
But who is the “you” in here ashish??? 😀
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thanku. “you” is a secret here. u will come to know afterwards………. 😀
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good one…well written..:)
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thanku very much sumsn didi.. thanx for liking my work….
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Good one. But big question is: who is that “you”? Reveal the secret please.
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thanx yar. there is no secret its only a imagination……….. 😀
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nice poem.. n indeed a good writen..
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thanku so much……..
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thanku so much……..
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such a nice writin….. keep it up.. 🙂
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Hmmm…… 🙂 best1…..!!!!
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thanku so much….
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Awesome dude !
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thanks surendra
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Fentabullous n rely a master piece which cn b expectd only frm u.well done n keep growing ur talent.a magnificient piece
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thanku nidhi for such a huge appreciation… welcome to my blog an thanks for giving ur time and liking my work
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awesum dude…is it realy wrtn by u…
Tu shayar kb se ban gya yr…
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thanks
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Lovely poem and reveal the secret, who is you in the poem???
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hahaha… there is no one mam, its just an imagination… if i will get that “you” then i will definately reveal it… 🙂
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