…I WANT YOU…


(My this poem is a feeling that most of us is having in our mind. Hope that u will like my work and u will definately enjoy it. Have a look at it….)

My arms are stretching for you.
My heart is crying for you.
My soul is dying for you.
My emotions are scattering for you.

When you will be mine, i don’t know.
When you will come with me i don’t know.
I have lots of proposals.
Converted all of them into disposal.
Just for you….

Making all effort to achieve you.
Don’t know why you are giving no response?
Just say once i will do everything for you.
But please don’t make your decision a suspense.

I want you no doubt.
I care for you no doubt.
Just give me a positive sign dear i will be forever for you.

But its really true that “I WANT YOU”…………..

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20 thoughts on “…I WANT YOU…

  1. ANSHUL August 2, 2011 / 8:29 pm

    So honest feelings…
    But who is the “you” in here ashish??? 😀

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    • Ashish kumar August 4, 2011 / 6:10 pm

      thanku. “you” is a secret here. u will come to know afterwards………. 😀

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  2. suman August 3, 2011 / 2:47 pm

    good one…well written..:)

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    • Ashish kumar August 4, 2011 / 6:11 pm

      thanku very much sumsn didi.. thanx for liking my work….

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  3. Prateek August 4, 2011 / 11:10 am

    Good one. But big question is: who is that “you”? Reveal the secret please.

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    • Ashish kumar August 4, 2011 / 6:12 pm

      thanx yar. there is no secret its only a imagination……….. 😀

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  4. satish August 4, 2011 / 7:21 pm

    nice poem.. n indeed a good writen..

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    • Ashish kumar August 5, 2011 / 4:29 pm

      thanku so much……..

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    • Ashish kumar August 5, 2011 / 4:29 pm

      thanku so much……..

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  5. jyoti vimal August 5, 2011 / 3:56 pm

    such a nice writin….. keep it up.. 🙂

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  6. aishwarya soni August 6, 2011 / 4:51 pm

    Hmmm…… 🙂 best1…..!!!!

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    • Ashish kumar October 23, 2011 / 1:20 pm

      thanku so much….

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  7. Surendra Kumar August 7, 2011 / 4:06 pm

    Awesome dude !

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    • Ashish kumar October 23, 2011 / 1:19 pm

      thanks surendra

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  8. Nidhi September 4, 2011 / 8:50 pm

    Fentabullous n rely a master piece which cn b expectd only frm u.well done n keep growing ur talent.a magnificient piece

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    • Ashish kumar October 23, 2011 / 1:18 pm

      thanku nidhi for such a huge appreciation… welcome to my blog an thanks for giving ur time and liking my work

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  9. pranav ghosh October 29, 2011 / 10:02 pm

    awesum dude…is it realy wrtn by u…
    Tu shayar kb se ban gya yr…

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    • Ashish kumar November 6, 2011 / 10:52 pm

      thanks

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    • Ashish kumar August 24, 2012 / 12:00 am

      hahaha… there is no one mam, its just an imagination… if i will get that “you” then i will definately reveal it… 🙂

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