…VOICE TO BE MINE FOREVER…


(…. I have tried to change my track of writing this time. My this poem is something different from my previous one. My most of the earlier poems was sad but this one is of different taste. I have given my all in this poem. Please do have a look and i hope you will definately like it….)

A voice that always appears on my ears.
This voice is enough to wash my tears.
A voice that always gives me company.
So that i should not feel lonely.

Whose voice is this?
So innocent, so charm and so relaxed.
It makes me tension free.
Feeling the sensation of having someone will be mine forever.

Heared many voices till now.
But this voice is really different.
As…
Felt this voice as my heart’s voice.
Ready to make a final choice.

Is this the voice of the one who always comes in my dream?
Having taste of this voice is really a cream.

I want this voice to be mine forever who will always be with me till my last fever.
So sweet, so delightful voice she have that i can’t stop myself.
Making a way to have a infinite journey with this voice.
I really want this “VOICE TO BE MINE FOREVER.”
– by ASHISH KUMAR

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24 thoughts on “…VOICE TO BE MINE FOREVER…

  1. ANSHUL June 10, 2011 / 9:09 pm

    she will surely become yours forever.

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    • Ashish kumar June 11, 2011 / 10:49 am

      ok. will wait for that day

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  2. Anubhav Kumar June 10, 2011 / 9:40 pm

    nice dude!! really heart touching!!! keep the spirit!

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    • Ashish kumar June 11, 2011 / 10:51 am

      THANKYOU VERY MUCH.

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  3. Surendra Kumar June 11, 2011 / 12:47 am

    mast hai baap !
    theme at last change kar hi liya tune !

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    • Ashish kumar June 11, 2011 / 10:52 am

      DHANYAWAAD SURENDRA BHAI……

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    • Ashish kumar June 11, 2011 / 10:53 am

      DHANYAWAD SURENDRA BHAI.

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  4. saurav chattaraj June 11, 2011 / 11:57 am

    great one dude !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!keep it up mahn ………………………………………………………………………………mast hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • Ashish kumar June 11, 2011 / 12:08 pm

      thanku very much saurav. keep inspiring me like this only

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  5. Vivek Kumar June 11, 2011 / 1:12 pm

    u knw a few days bck I watchd a romantic movie ‘A walk to remember’. probably u hv seen it. The story ends tragically with d death of the girl. But the boy still loves her. He remembers d lines she used 2 tell him-” I love this wind, I may not see but I can feel it.”. he felt the same 4 their eternal love which he cant see but surely feel. maybe d voice u dont see whose it is, but still u cn feel it, it soothes ur senses.
    And this poem surely calmed my nerves…. Kudos…!!

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    • Ashish kumar June 13, 2011 / 12:43 pm

      no vivek i rarely watch hollywood movies…… u liked my work its great for me…..

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  6. Prateek Das June 11, 2011 / 2:45 pm

    Nice one bro!! And if you really want that. then your wish will come true someday.

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    • Ashish kumar June 13, 2011 / 12:44 pm

      thanx a lot. thanx for ur well wishes……….

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  7. satish June 11, 2011 / 11:28 pm

    well..hmm..let me comment in hindi coz dis hindi voice wud touch..
    dil ko chuu gai tumhari ye kisi ki awaaz sunane ki baate…kafi acha hai..
    great work done..keep it up n i will b d visitor of ur blog.. n hope 4 some nice works..- with all blessings
    — SATISH SRIVASTAVA

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    • Ashish kumar June 13, 2011 / 12:45 pm

      meharbaani aaaaapki jo aapne mere kam ki sarahna ki. thaknku very much.

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    • Ashish kumar June 13, 2011 / 12:47 pm

      got a new girlfriend means?????????? earlier also i didn’t have any gf……. i m happy to be single.

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  8. Sayani Mukherjee June 15, 2011 / 10:07 pm

    good that u changed from sad to more hopeful poetry!! 🙂 “like”

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    • Ashish kumar June 16, 2011 / 3:12 pm

      oh thankuu very much sayani didi…. i will try to keep this track only mostly.

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  9. Chanda June 17, 2011 / 8:31 am

    ur this poem is really romantic and heart touching. ur best creation so far.thanks and good luck.

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  10. Chandan June 24, 2011 / 8:39 am

    nice

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  11. Sounak Kabasi August 2, 2011 / 10:53 am

    hmmmm…. impressive keep up d gud wrk dude…!!!!

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  12. aishwarya soni August 6, 2011 / 4:47 pm

    Awesome !!!! i really liked it ! gud job Ashish !

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    • Ashish kumar October 23, 2011 / 1:20 pm

      thanku aishwarya for liking

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